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Kitsune Kit
2009-05-01 . chapter 1
AMAZING I love it!
DaughterOfSorceress-Lion
2008-10-26 . chapter 1
OMG! SWEET! That was awasome, seriously, go figure didn't have a clue, that was what made it so awsome, LOVE the shirt, he really should wear it on his 24th... With the hat.
Heva4goh
2006-07-20 . chapter 1
hi
mz-murderous
2006-05-11 . chapter 1
hahaha!! great story. great plot.
the presents for Squall are definitely funny!!

I just wish there was more humour in it. But I admit it brought a few giggles out of me. ^^

I applaud you... fantastic work!!

-SLy
Moshi Moshi Mai
2005-06-01 . chapter 1
Haha I liked this! Very well written and in character =D

-Moshi Moshi Mai
Seagull 12348
2005-03-15 . chapter 1
awsome story, please when you get a chance work on the other stories. i love reading them
ynmy
2004-12-25 . chapter 1
nice nice~! well, gotta sai dat i kinda believed it was a real GF! anyways, gr8 work!
Leonhart17
2004-12-07 . chapter 1
Aww, that was sweet of them to throw him a party. I have to admit that I thought the robot was for real. Kinda suprised me. Good work.
Sam241
2004-10-31 . chapter 1
A well written, very original piece. The end of the party certainly had some twist!
The Angel of the Lion
2004-10-22 . chapter 1
Great one-shot fic. It really got me laughing.
CTHKSI
2004-09-17 . chapter 1
Lol...all this 23rd stuff. :D Haha...this was great. Loved it.
Optical Goddess
2004-09-08 . chapter 1
Hey, cool! That whole '23' thing, I never realized it was his golden birthday, and going by the release dates, he really would be 23 already! wow, time flies. I like the shirt he got at from Seifer! Haha, that's hilarious!
Iaya R. White
2004-09-07 . chapter 1
This was a really good story. I was really surprised by the ending and it gave me a good laugh. You did really well on this story, and I hope to read more stories from you in the future. You are a good writer. Keep up the good work.
Aaron D
2004-09-06 . chapter 1
Oh my God, this may be the best Final Fantasy Eight story I've ever read (even including my own!)! I can't really give you any criticism, because I couldn't find anything particularly wrong or anything that needed improvement. So, there we are. An incredible feat of literary dominance. DOMINANCE, I tell you!

I can totally see how Squall would be opposed to any drinking or whatever, and how the others would constantly try to sneak liquor and stuff into his drinks/food/whatever. Just, the whole thing rocked from beginning to end. Thank you.
melissagurl
2004-09-05 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this story!! Squall is so cute...I feel bad for him. ^_~ Thanks for keeping me laughing!
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