This is really good. Very detailed and descriptive. :-)

The beginning was nice, but I hope Ryan and MArissa are together. i love them.

I really enjoyed that. Very well written with thoughtful details and the characterizations were bang on. Excellent!

Read this at LJ last night but wanted to leave a review here. Have reviewed your other stories as well and I loved all of them. This one was very well done and you know that Seth would totally want to know what happened.

"why didn’t he think of locking the door."

Damn straight. Then perhaps we could have seen just a bit more of what was going on betwixt Ryan and Grandma Gabby. Some found it squicky but I just thought it was hot. Great job on your assignment. I hope your planning on doing another or that you've started on a new story. Looking forward to more from you. BTW, thanks for all of your great and thoughtful reviews to my stories. I really appreciate them.

I don't read much Ryan but I liked this a lot. Especially the Seth being all adorable, happy, excited over having Summer kiss him. Aww.