You did a very good job Congradulations and also I think the Hermione and Ron should be childhood friends.

Great start, I'm glad James is still alive. I think that it would be good if something happened to Harry. Seeing as he has got a lot of adult support around him now, perhaps he could become blind or something? He needs something to make him stand out from the rest...and it would be interesting to see a blind Harry with parents story. Any way it goes would be good though, Please update soon!

I luved this chappie! Please update soon as this fic is cool!

put Ron in since hermione is a mugle. i don't know if i spelled that right. anyways its a good story.

Yeah I thought that was great especially how you wrote James' saddness. Can't wait to read more!

That was good I would like to see how this story carries on.

I like the idea, please review.

really realy shory but its a good idea.