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| Diary 2007-12-22 ch 1, | abuseI enjoyed this. |
| Public Secrets 2007-12-05 ch 1, | abuseD< NARAKU!-kicks naraku where dah sun don't shine- There. He is dead.:D Bri(My friend): ...That sucked...(my kicking Naruku) And their story rocked. Me: ;-; But... He's a guy... >> Or... Is he...? :o Kagura: -Snorts- It's the latter. xD I liked it; poor Sesshy... Poor Kagura.-sniffles- |
| Moon-Diva 2007-02-16 ch 1, | abuseLovely! Really moving! Keep writing! |
| Preppyblack 2004-12-20 ch 1, | abuse(SOB)This is worse than reading the chapter,how you pictured her pain,and Sesshomaru's pity was just to much for me...now if you excuse me I'm going to cry in a little corner...(Walks over to the little corner and sobs her heart out.) |
| Silver Queen 2004-10-01 ch 1, | abuseWicked! Awesome! Impressive! etc etc This is a very moving piece, sad yet ... free. The last line is very impactful, it isn't joined on in anyway, yet makes absolute sense. |
| nulled 2004-09-21 ch 1, | abuseNo OCC, no spelling/grammar mistakes (as far as I can read), and definitely the thoughts that we can believe Sesshoumaru would think. This was one of the most excellent one-shots I've read, ever. You truly have a way with words, and this story is definitely going on my favourites (mind you, I don't have a lot). I can't explain how I felt when I read this! It really does seem like Sesshoumaru, I thought when I first opened this, it'd be like "Sesshoumaru loved Kagura..." or something. But it's not. There's not even the slightest hint of OCC, something I'm obsessed with fics about. A truly magnificent work ;) |
| Haruyuki 2004-09-09 ch 1, | abuseIts been a while since I've looked at your fics...and I've likely forgotten how much I liked the mood you seem to set up for every one of them. Sesshomaru was perfectly in character, as usual. Yes, one does see a lot of manga-based fanfics with the Sess/Kagura pairing. I, for one, agree with what you did here in that those two really haven't had enough character development as to be at that point. This is believeable, yet still heart-wrenchingly beautiful. Grr...I recovered from post-374 depression not a week ago, and here it begins to set in again... ^_^ Off to reread "A Way to Survive"... |
| TanyaRox 2004-09-05 ch 1, | abuseVery true to character, you should be proud. Sesshoumaru/Kagura is too tragic... |
| SilverWolf-Ryuki 2004-09-03 ch 1, | abuseThis is such a good fic, i had to sign in... and i repeat myself, this is SUCH a good fic! yersh, poking is brain...its almost as if instead of poking it, you read it...it's so believable! XD for once (or twice), it isn't a really mushy...'thing'. this is going on my fav's list. |
| ashley 2004-09-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseI was sort of confused at the begining of your summary does Sesshomaru die? Cause you wrote I have seen a whole hord of Kagura's POV shorts on her death but I have yet to see a Sesshomaru one. Does this mean from his point of view?Or does he die to?Please say it isn't so! Worship your lord Sesshomaru, Ashley.August@comcast.net |
| Sweet Raine 2004-09-02 ch 1, | abuseahh! i juss love this story! this one shot is so kewl!! |
| Red XIV 2004-09-02 ch 1, | abuseTenseiga didn't work because it can't heal the wounded. It can only revive those who are already dead. Kagura wasn't dead yet. And once she died, her body was gone. Tenseiga also needs a body to revive someone. |
| drake220 2004-09-01 ch 1, | abusevery nice! lord, i cried when i read chp 374 and i have to say, i really really liked this. the simplicity of the writing really went straight for how sess thinks- methodically with no frills. the end was a little melodramatic but suited sess also. paying back debts to kagura even if she's dead is the honorable way to do things after all. i liked it a lot |
| klutz82 2004-09-01 ch 1, | abusecool! yeah i read that chapter and was happy that he came, but sad that he couldn't save her. i love how you got into his mind! i'm sad to see kagura go, but she is finally free... this was an awesome fic!! |
| Khepri 2004-09-01 ch 1, | abuseYes, yes, yes, yes, yes! This is exactly what Sesshoumaru was feeling. Congratulations for putting it so perfectly into words. And he is going to be the one to kill Naraku. The series might be named after his half-brother, but now Sesshoumaru has all the reason. (Naraku kidnapped Rin, tried to absorb him, and then killed the one person he could have had a relationship with.) I'm still confused with why Tenseiga refused to work for him, but you did a good job of capturing Sesshoumaru's character in this. |