nice story

It is amazing that through the whole series neither of them truly snapped in regards to the personal tension

I love the way you wrote the fire between them in this, although the ending is a bit abrupt (I can see why you left it up to the reader's imagination though). I'm not sure I believe he'd be that disrespectful, or that she'd react so desperately, but it was well-written.

kinda sad, cute and adorable at the same time. it was great all roucn :)

I loved it! I'm just not sure if Chakotay would be so cruel......

Definitely one of the best VOY fics I've read in a long time. Keep it up!

Oh, I love it!!!!!! On to part two.

I loved it! It was the best! OMG!! It was SOOOOO good! write lots more!

omg, that was amazing! seriously, it was one of the best j/c stories i've read in a long time. very, very good. your writing is excellent and you portrayed the characters perfectly. I LOVE this story!!! please write more!

Love it!

*squeals in delight* Great ending!!!! I loved the entire story!!! It was great!!! Keep it up!!! Off to read pt 2!!!