It was a good story, but you needed to wait longer for Ron to open up, and more detail.

man u should stick to sad stories are part from that the plot is good but u made kim all gaga 4 josh and then ron come and wins her heart back.

make more chapters about what happens

no ofence but dat romance fing was a bit corney... a but of advice (not ment rudely)you cud hav put in wat kim was thinking and ron .:D

i like your story, but try to make them longer, it's still a good start.
can i ask you a stupid question?
why is your nickname soccergurl1990, i dont understand it... i tried to get it in my head but i cant.
example: my nickname is laura1990, which means my real name is Laura, and i was born in 1990
thanks
cya
LAURA ROGERS.

great story

not bad at all

make more chapters

drama Attack,muchly?

I watched an episode where Kim had a supreme lack of interest in Josh Mankey. Ron commented on it numerous times but was completely unbothered. Then Josh started dating Terra, and Kim actually didn't care at all, but Ron learned that Terra had liked him and he had never known about it. He lamented even more when Wade asked how he was taking it, and asked him why he hadn't told him either.

This story was really kool, cute and a sweet ending! great!

kitty-krazy04

ok ill be honest it was pretty bad
try a little harder next time

Very cool story! can't wait to see what happens in the next story you write (update soon Plz)

Nice and cute.

Hey! Love your story, its intresting, sad, and sweet at the same time. poor kim..but thankfully shes with Ron