Reviews for Harry Potter & The Power Of Hogwarts

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duskglow 2008-09-24 ch 1,	abuseThe grammar is OK but it's a little simplistic. In some places it felt like compound sentences would have fit better. Don't know why they're (they were) picking on you, though. I've seen much worse here.
Mione 2008-09-18 ch 25, anon.	abuseHi,i like this story. When are next chapter coming? and pleease don't write/happen more sad thing about Harry:) go for it!
SiriusBlackTheMarauder 2008-07-28 ch 25,	abuseOf course people wouldn't review before the last chapter, they read the whole fic in on shot! Anyway, great story. I'm off to read the sequel now!
SiriusBlackTheMarauder 2008-07-28 ch 23,	abuseIs this the end of the harry/tonks? NO! (YES!)
SiriusBlackTheMarauder 2008-07-27 ch 2,	abuseclear but cloudy sky... how contradictory
k13cat 2008-04-18 ch 22,	abuseOh my, I can't believe ... poor Dobby. A truer friend to his last breath than any other. I don't think I've ever read a story that did that.
k13cat 2008-04-16 ch 9,	abuseI've been reading so quickly, I only just realized I haven't stopped to say how much I am enjoying this story. I love it when Harry takes control of his own destiny--especially if it involves yelling at the so-called adults. Harry yelling through the floo in the Order meeting a few chapters back was stellar. The battle scene at Azkaban was a bit hard to follow at times, but brilliant. I'm still pondering who the mysterious wizard Harry battled was since Snape wasn't there. I'm glad that Remus has become that strong part of Harry's family. Tonks is okay, you've managed to write her so that I can stand her more than usual, though in the very beginning of the story I felt like she need a few slaps about the head to get some sense. I'm very glad that it seems she is a sister rather than getting into a pairing with Harry. Ginny seems to be mooning and jealous over Tonks & Harry--that jealousy and sense of entitlement is one of the reasons I don't like Ginny. What made me stop in this chapter was Ron whinging about Harry not writing to them. Moron. Ron hasn't bothered to write a letter as far as I can see, beyond birthday presents, so he has no room to complain.
hp/nt shipper 2008-04-06 ch 25, anon.	abusei have to admit your story was good...BUT...i think you should have kept writing and had harry seek his revenge for tonks death by destroying himself, voldemort and the deatheaters by learning the charm of life you couldve managed that with another 5-6 chapters and an extra chapter on the events after his death, it would have been an even better story. other than that congrats on a well written story
Lahmikhara 2008-03-27 ch 25,	abuseLoved the story it started a bit rough on the edges but it kept getting better and better. And after a couple of chapters I was completely cought up in the story. I can only hope the story I have started recently will turn out even nearly as well as this one did. Although I did hate to see poor Tonks die it was really written perfectly and for some reason I keep hoping she pops up somewhere in the sequel again, either in live or after all is over in the afterlife. (Yes I'm a sucker for 'good' endings :P) Anyway great story Sincerely, Lahmikhara
shellsboy24 2008-02-14 ch 1,	abusegreat story
Treck 2008-02-14 ch 25,	abuseAre you alive?
gareth 2008-01-24 ch 25, anon.	abuseHi, my name is Gareth and i have just sat and read your whole fic. It was mindblowing! Usually I only read completed stories, but reading that, i need to start the sequel. As an afterthought, i noticed just a couple of spelling mistakes and paragraphs that were cut short or had missing text. if you ever need a beta then just email me. I would have the chapter back to you within a couple of hours. Usually, lol. Thank you again for a fantastic story. Gareth
saiyukicloud 2007-12-13 ch 12,	abuseWhat happened to the spying device thing harry asked the twins to do? I hoped for a mention. Anyway Gd chapter!
saiyukicloud 2007-12-13 ch 12, anon.	abuseI was wondering why harry potter didnt try to know his animagus form its actually quite useful in situations...Well wormtail escaped twiced with it.
saiyukicloud 2007-12-13 ch 7, anon.	abusedamn i would have liked some snape bashing and his reactions of how his "master" was going to punish. Nevertheless good chapter Keep it Up!

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