I really wish that you'd continue this story - It's fabulous (I love how you portray Albus, he always struck me as distanced from others' needs). I hope you do finish this fic!

Wow.
no fluff. just... I dunno.

Very different. I liked it even though it was so...sad and... angry.

Other chapters could be used in this, no? Perhaps Hector and Albus and Minerva in the actual time?
*Shrug* it works well on it's own too.
*Goes off to cry*

That was really good. Really well written, and I particularly like the ending when you realise you're in the pensive. The subject matter is uncomfortable - as it is surely meant to be. Perhaps I am too used to humourous and fluffy fics so, as you point out, it's time for a change! This was refreshing. I was getting bored of reading randomly churned out crap.
Is this a one-off, or will there be another chapter(s)? I think it works well on its own.

Thank you so much. I love AD/MM, but I've always hated when they keep their kids secret. What hell it must be for the kids! You've written this wonderfully, and unlike many of the other fics it's totally plausible-I know I'd blow up if my parents did that to me. Thanks again, and do please continue.

wow - this was fab *grin*
you simply have to continue
thanks for sharing
Linds

Wow, this was great. Keep on writing. I want to know what happens to Deirdre and Hector.

Interesting. I do not normally read 'Next Generation' Fan Fictions per-say. However, I would like to know why Albus and Minerva would hide their children from every one. This looks like it could be very interesting.