Good fic. Bad concept.

Narnia really doesn't mix well with any other series.

Very cool, I like!

Good view of both Narnia, and Chrono Trigger. And some very good interpretation of C.S. Lewis tales there.

Do some more!

Excellent story! Possibly one of the best crossovers I've ever read! This one's going on my Favorites list for sure!

That's sweet!

AAAHH! Torture! How dare you end it there? Still, it's a terrificly written fic, and the crossover element works out perfectly. Who'd have thought that Crono Trigger and The Chronicles of Narnia would be so compatible?

You better write more! I hate all those jerk who never finish fanfics. You know te complaint, so bye!

Cool! That was pretty good. Although I don't comment about spelling erorrs, I notice one: "The crulest, backstabbing tyrant that ever lived." Schala said. That was A boo-boo on your part. Hope that didn't give anything away! The complaint is only to the master of the site, so don't worry! It is to put back up the "Sort by Author" thing again. See ya!

Uhh, isn't this Chrono Trigger mixed with the book The Lion, well, I don't know what the rest of the book is called, but that is a book. Though I never read the book, This sounds like something my friend said to me. That alright though. Well, a coplaint that I have for the master of site is to put back up the "Sort by Author" catagory up again. Well, later!

I only have one suggestion: Magus. Using a sword? Whats up with that? However, the circumstances are understandable and the fic is great so I have no problem with it. You are doing an excellent job of melding Narnia and Chrono Trigger. You even read all the books and use the history accuratly. Very impressive.

CLIFFHANGER, THIS IS TORTURE!CAN'T WAIT

["The cruelest, backstabbing tyrant that ever lived." Schala replied.]

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great story!

Write more. Now.

This is a very unusual fic.

Generally, a crossover between unrelated mediums gets bogged down by

both poor authorship and a tendancy to be shlocky. This author really seems to try to understand a means of crossover that makes sense...and I think he has done a good job.

Good work, Ryan.

Your writing style is phenomenal, and you really bring back old memories of reading the Chronicles of Narnia three times through, especially considering you practically know the world as well as Lewis himself. The only thing that is somewhat inconsistent is your use of Lavos. He was already a perfect organism, combining the best DNA of every creature in the universe. So how can he become anymore powerful?