this is great, is potter coming in the next issue? i mean, the redemption serie and this is so interwined it is beautiful! plz continue both!

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Interesting start! As a side note, I love allusions to classical mythology and whatnot, so work in what you can, that’s always a nice touch. (And hopefully I’ll be bright enough to pick them out. ^_~) And as another side note, thank you so much for getting Ginevra right and not putting Virginia. But what has happened to our sweet Ginny? She’s gone so dreadfully dark (though I can see the strains in her canon personality that could turn into something like that)! Guess I’ll have to wait and see.
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Hm…what else was I going to say? Oh yes, nice use of dialogue as well as description. Also, is Draco showing up any time soon? I do so love him.
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And apologies for my rambling. I am in need of caffeine. Keep up the writing!