 ZenKat 2004-09-03 . chapter 1*snickers* All I can say is that you do make these stories a bit short sometimes, but within the space given- a lot happens! The details flow- the rhythm for the reader is never broken- the characters are three dimentional- and...personally, I think Neil Gaiman would honestly like reading this one! (but that's just me) You need to make your stories a bit longer- just a bit, but otherwise: Awesome work! Absolutely wonderful writing- and must see more of it! Keep it up :-) |