fantastic story, you really captured the emotion of watching people you love in their dying moment, and not being able to do a damned thing about it.

sweet, sad, dark. Perfect combination.

okkayy. creepy,very creepy! i loved it!

O... Creepy. And yes, this dooes work with what probably were Robin's thoughts in those episodes... Nice job.

who is it?! >:@
>.

Wow, beautiful!

*tear* Your'e poems and stories always seem to make me cry. This was the perfect combination of beauty and sadness. Excellent work!

Oh...intense. Very well done. I loves me some RobinAngst. Here's hoping you've written more--or will write more!

Very cool, his feelings of helplessness as he watches the other ( I assume
Starfire, but it could be anyone) die in front of him. Being powerless to stop
a death is sometimes worse than causing it. Great job. ^_^

OMG that is so sad! Who lived though?

I'm guessing from your A/N that this was Robin's thoughts, but really...this could've been applied to anyone of the Titans at any given time. It's very general, and that's cool! ^_^

What I like about your style is the way you structure your sentences more than anything else. I think you are well aware that it's not just vocab and wording that keeps people attentive, but the way in which the sentences carry those ideas. It greatly reflects your tone and affects how the readers read the piece.

But you know that, I bet. ^_^ Great job!

UPDATE NOW and Dont let Raven Or Starfire die! if the die I do 2!

oH.. Great Story, make more chapters...
So get typing already

well, i don't know much about poems that don't rhyme...it sounded like something someone would have a nightmare about. it was really angsty and did sound like what robin might have been thinking at some point.

I'm gonna cry now. No, burst into tears! That is so sad. ;_; Very well written. oO