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| Cettie-girl 2005-05-13 ch 1, | abuseAw... so unbelievably kawaii... Poor Ryou... so sad... so not wanting to risk anyone else's safety/happiness... *hugs him* |
| The Leaky Pen 2005-01-29 ch 1, | abuseCute! I like! ^_^ |
| nummy-cream-puff 2004-12-12 ch 1, | abuseoh!, i had to read this! i already love the series beginning with Visions of the heart!! i swear. how do you write so many storys?! you are in the sam league as white angel chan yah know. you are sucha good authoress. i love angst! but you have good humpr sidestorys., if you don;t have one you should make one! (or more) ok sory for bugging you, i ma just a 30th rate authoress (i.e. completly and utterly horrible) |
| Smiley 2004-12-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseEvery time I read this I cry. Even though I know it turns out ok.Anyway, good little story |
| Yukina89 2004-10-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseI don't know if I skould smile or cry.It was sweet and sad. |
| Liviania 2004-09-16 ch 1, | abuseVery sweet...short, but a good feeling. Livi |
| Bastet Starwind 2004-09-10 ch 1, | abuse*sniffle, sob, sneeze* Really bad idea to read such a sweet and sad story when you have a cold. *gives Ryou a stuffed teddy bear* That was wonderful WSJ-sama, keeping up to par. ^^ *sniffle* Short, but sweet, heh, frightened tomb robbers always make me laugh. |
| Saiyan Jedi 2004-09-08 ch 1, | abuseinteresting to read about a version of the Child of Fate who still has his sight. *snickers* but this brings up several things. You'll hate me for pointing out your plot holes, but I must. Fate appears looking like the change of heart. I quote "he thought he saw his mother" your response would be something along the lines of "She would appear like that because she wants Ryou to see her as his mother" Okay, that's all fine and dandy, but isn't the original Angeline Anjil reincarnated? Meaning they would look nearly exaclty alike. Since Fate had to pose as Angeline she therefore would look nearly exactly like Anjil. Bakura, unlike Yami, still has his memories. So he would recognize her as Anjil. Perhaps that's what his "You... you" was, but I highly doubt it. Perhaps you have a ready made explination for this, but if you don't, I can give you one. It's what I do. Several friends of mine have had plotholes that I've provided good explinations for, one better than her own. My explination - Fate appeared as Angeline for Ryou to comfort him, but only to him. To Bakura she appeared in her own form, which fits rather well. Then again, maybe you already thought of this. *shrug* Anyways, other than that one little plothole, I really liked it. Nice little bit of angst there. And Ryou and Fate fluffyness. By the way, is hotmail free? Forgot to ask that in my e-mail (i think i had several typos in there too. I typed it in ten minutes right before I left for the bus). I've been thinking about getting my own e-mail address, and I've been asking around about yahoo and hotmail. Okay, weird side note. How do you think up titles!? I can think for hours and only come up with corny stuff. Your titles fit! Okay, I'm really long winded, aren't I? "Remember, don't drink and watch anime at the same time!" - pres. of my school's anime club. She was talking about anything, even water. (half the club gets drunk off water.) |
| QueenOfGames2 2004-09-05 ch 1, | abuseO! I like it! Very interesting! I hope you get the chance to update soon! (That is if this wasn't a one-shot) lol! The *Queen Of Games* |
| Nachzes-Black Rider 2004-09-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseNachzes: Yeah, short. A writers block preventer? |
| Agent Yoko 2004-09-03 ch 1, | abuseAww...that was so sweet...^^ |
| SmoeB1 2004-09-02 ch 1, | abusethis is soo good, poor Ryou, please update soon! |
| crazydominodragongirl 2004-09-02 ch 1, | abuseSo sweet! And good, too! Happy birthday, Ryou! *birthday-glomp to Ryou, and you, too!* ^_^ Anyway, I'm off to read your other update now... good job on this one! |
| pinkpinkblink 2004-09-02 ch 1, | abuse^^ Cute! Bakura got told! Bakura: >.< Shaddup. |
| Tomgirl27 2004-09-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw...Fate really cares for Ryou. Well, of course, but-oh, forget it. And Ryou, that IS your mother...you just don't know it. This is so CUTE! Hm...Bakura's eyes wide comically. Well, if it could happen to Kurama...who knows? So...I know this is a stupid question, but who IS stupid enough to face an angry goddess? I can't think of anybody... |