this is so good .:)

Wow, this is lovely. It seems you have a great knack for getting into Angel's head - such a dark place. I love how he keeps repeating things, like it'll be true if he just keeps repeating it. The way his thoughts flow is perfect: here to there, back a bit, and just when he's about to think he -did- love her, he changes track, reminds himself how happy she is. In short, excellent and beautiful.

Much loff,
Liz

Aw! So cool and awesome and sweet. It's short, yes, but v. nice. I agree that it wouldn't have fit into the chapter, but's it great that it was seen anyway. It's not to mushy or overly prosaic, but I think it's beautiful nonetheless - too beautiful to let it gather dust in the mind's attic.

Much loff,
Liz

VERY sweet. That just made me go aw.

Aw... so sweet. Short, but that just adds to it. I like how Dennis did that for Cordy... aw again. ;) I like, please continue

That was so sweet. Got goosebumps at the next to last line. Very cute and clever story.