 Psionicnemesis 2004-11-19 . chapter 10You made another successful Digimon Frontier
Fic Special congratulations |
 Pyra Kurai Akaidra 2004-11-16 . chapter 10 Pyra: Hey,Ninetalesuk!It's been a while.Anyway,the story was somewhere between good and great,but somewhat leaning towards great.Thanks for using Ryumon,even though his part isn't that long.
See ya later,there's a B-rank mission waiting for me with my name on it!
~Pyra Kurai Akaidra~ |
 Wormapple 2004-10-25 . chapter 10 WAAH! DO TOUCHING! Awesome fic! cant wait 4 u 2 re-start A world of adventure and collision! I really liked thisa 1 2. |
 Youkai Youko 2004-10-25 . chapter 10Great chapter.
That was a great final chapter, I loved it :)
Now Valmarmon is defeat, Silesia and the digital world will be in peace. But Why I have a feeling the dark god will return? Anyway, great final :clap: |
 Cave Cat 2004-10-25 . chapter 10Hooray! Susanoomon defeated Valmarmon IM! That's great! Now that you've finished this story, then you'll get back to writing "A World Of Adventure And Collision!". See ya later! |
 queen_of_games90 2004-10-25 . chapter 10 Alright! Susanoomon did it! That was an excellent story from start to finish! I hope you come out with another good one later. I'll be waiting! |
 Dragi 2004-10-25 . chapter 10that was a really cool and exciting story. I liked the end of it. I hope you write more of this story. I like them really much.
good luck with your stories.
love dragi |
 Wormapple 2004-10-22 . chapter 9H.U.R.R.Y. U.P! only one chapter to defeat IM! I got an idea. Make Susanoomon have all the mega digimon give him their power and help him mode change to Union mode! My fanmade!
Susanoomon Union Mode
Mega
Divine Digimon
Strike of the Seraphim (sp)
Ancient Slash
Digi Destroyer (de-digivolves all digimon around him)
if u wanna use ur own ending, fine but u can use mine |
 Jeremy 2004-10-21 . chapter 9 Great chappie! Since you can't use Rainbowmon in this story, could you use him in your other story?
Personality: He is always cheerful and funny. But when it gets down to fighting Evil Digimon, he gets serious!!
Think about it please!?! |
 queen_of_games90 2004-10-21 . chapter 9 Susanoomon? Yeah! Nice twist, Ninetalesuk. It's okay if you didn't used Ryukaimon, I really wasn't counting on it. You could use it for another one of your Digimon Frontier stories. Otherwise, it's really going cool. I hope the next chapter is what I hope it will be. |
 Youkai Youko 2004-10-21 . chapter 9Cool chapter. I liked the chat of Kouichi and Looweenmon in german ^^
So, Sussanomon is back. So, we can say goodbye to valmarmon; YEAH!!
See ya in the next chapter |
 Cave Cat 2004-10-21 . chapter 9Yay! You finally updated! ^_^ I was so worried. But you didn't include KnightCheetahmon and his mode-changed form. -_- Oh, well. Maybe next time when you later add more chapters of "A World Of Adventure And Collision!", you can probably have time to add Socramon, Manxmon, and Lemurmon's Mega forms. Anyway, keep up the good work. |
 Dragi 2004-10-21 . chapter 9That was really cool and exciting chapter. please hurry up and update really soon please I cant wait to the next chapter to find out what will happen next please. and good luck with your story and the next chapter.
love dragi |
 queen_of_games90 2004-10-18 . chapter 8 Valmarmon IM, eh? Looks like the Digidestined will need more than just their lone powers to defeat this baby! I hope you can include Ryukaimon in your story. He is a warrior who could never be control by the forces of evil. He is also known for protecting the weak at all costs. Anyway, good chapter. Hope you'll continue to write these excellent stories. |
 Cave Cat 2004-10-15 . chapter 8Oh, no! It appears that Valmarmon Inferno Mode is too powerful for the Digidestined. But I've got an idea for a Mega Digimon who can be able to try and stop him. Here he is:
NAME: KnightCheetahmon
LEVEL: Mega
TYPE: Vaccine
Knight Digimon
ATTACKS: Thunder Blade, Medeival Sparks
Personality: KnightCheetahmon is known to have a very noble and loyal nature and he is sometimes very powerful in a battle.
Description of attacks: Thunder Blade-KnightCheetahmon pulls out the sword from the sheath on his back and slashes it sending out a blade of silver electric energy at his foes. Medeival Sparks-KnightCheetahmon spreads out his arms and fires a bunch of blue and yellow sparks from the medeival symbol on his chest at his enemies.
Description: He looks like a feline-like version of WarGreymon but he's the same size as Angemon, has a silver chest plate with a medeival symbol on it, bronze armor on his lower torso and his upper legs, a pair of gold and silver gauntlets on his hands with claws on the tips, a pair of platinum steel clad boots with his three-toed feet poking out, a gold orange helmet on his head with a brown mohawk on top, a pair of gold anklets around his ankles, a silver sword in a sheath on his back, and a gold face mask covering his face except his green eyes.
And here's his mode-changed form:
NAME: KnightCheetahmon Golden Mode
LEVEL: Mega
TYPE: Vaccine
Exalted Knight Digimon
ATTACKS: Lightning Slash, Dynamo Spear, Sword Tornado
Personality: KnightCheetahmon GM is 12 times more powerful than his orignal form and any evil Digimon especially Valmarmon IM. His powers are even stronger than Omnimon and Susanoomon combined.
Description of attacks: Lightning Slash: KnightCheetahmon GM pulls out his sword which is sparkling with gold electricity and slashes his enemies really rapidly giving them damage. Dyanmo Spear-KnightCheetahmon GM flaps his wings forward firing a rain of gold-green lightning bolts that can pin his enemies to the ground. Sword Tornado-This is KnightCheetahmon GM's finishing attack. He pulls out his sword then he flies forward with his sword in front of him while spinning his body around until he strikes the foe at a powerful rate.
Description: He looks like a modified version of KnightCheetahmon with platinum armor all over his body, has spikes on his anklets, gray steel clad boots, a pair of white angelic wings on his back, a split shield on his back with a medeival symbol, the sheath with the sword is on his waist this time, his helmet is colored teal with a silver feather on top, a bronze face mask, and bronze and platinum gauntlets this time.
This is how you'll probably write the next chapter:
Valmarmon Inferno Mode would continue flying in the sky making his way to the real world until he hears a voice yell, "You're not going anywhere, Valmarmon!" Then, Valmarmon IM would look around to find out who said that. Then, KnightCheetahmon would appear in front of Valmarmon IM and tell him that he's not gonna enter the real world and destroy all the humans living there and Valmarmon IM would tell KnightCheetahmon that if he wants to stop him, he's gonna have to get through him first. Then, KnightCheetahmon would jump and give Valmarmon IM a powerful kick in the chest causing him to fall back down to Silesia World. Valmarmon IM would then tell KnightCheetahmon that he can't do this to him because his plans are at stake but KnightCheetahmon would say that that's not possible because if Valmarmon IM entered the real world, then all humans would lose their lives as well. Then, the two Mega level Digimon would engage in a fight. KnightCheetahmon would have the upper hand at first but then Valmarmon IM would start to beat the stuffing out of KnightCheetahmon and would be about to scan his Fractal Code when the Digidestined's D-Tectors would suddenly glow and shoot out beams of light that would instantly engulf KnightCheetahmon and Valmarmon IM would ask what's going on. Then, KnightCheetahmon would show Valmarmon IM a most surprising thing, MODE CHANGE!
I could tell you the rest but I'll have to wait until you put up the next chapter. Update soon anyway and I hope that you'll get back to writing "A World Of Adventure And Collision" soon. |