I think you should write more. This story seemed good, and I would like to read more of it, if you ever feel the urge to write more.

I liked it and hope you will continue. I'd like more of the adventures to be told. Interesting beginning. More please.

Hey, neat story. The idea with the gazelle and lion reference fits really well.

Aw, I loved this! Daniel seems like the kind of guy who would have had an imaginary friend as a kid. I'd love to read more if you write it. :)

I always leave my options open. Go ahead

This is fascinating...
Please tell us what happens next?

Definately need more Amon and Daniel adventures, but this is a very nice introduction. Perhaps a series of vignettes?