Great story! I could actually see this as an episode, as I got to watch the first season on DVD recently, I was able to hear and picture the actors playing this out. Thanks!

Only one word can describe this story, "EXCELLENT".

Thank you for a well-constructed, well-written (and grammatically correct) story. You tend to minimize the action scenes- they had to play them up on the TV series, but in a written piece you can get more into the characters' heads.

I hope you will write more "bionic" stories.

Maybe you can include Max the Bionic Dog in a future story about Jaime. I'd like to see your treatment, including Max's "thoughts."

Thanks again.

carrboar

Nice story. I also enjoyed HOME

Excellent story! I'm so glad someone finally did a SMDM story. I loved it!