 DarkZX 2009-01-06 . chapter 5Don't give it up, it's really good. If you're having trouble thinking, of getting them out of this mess, just remember just because he doesn't have the Pharaoh on his site anymore, doesn't mean he can't mind crush them. |
 dawnmiko 2007-02-15 . chapter 6god this is so depressing... but I'm going to keep reading...
please update soon |
 ATM 2006-01-05 . chapter 1please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!finish the story
please!i beg of you! |
 teagal375 2005-11-18 . chapter 4Love it! At firat I could not imagine Tea as a **, but you put it in a easy to understand way. |
 Keyo-Red Angel of Hope 2005-05-10 . chapter 4Gr. No good punk of a git! Yugi should ring up Joey and Tristan, let him find out how it feels to have the crap beaten out of you 19 different ways!
You're writing has greatly improved since the first chapters, and this story is getting very gripping. I'm really enjoying this.
Keep up the brilliant standard. You're truly inovative and original. |
 tai'sgirl23 2005-05-08 . chapter 4don't you dare stop writing this! this story is great! please keep updating. don't let yugi die!! |
 MysticDragon1691 2005-05-01 . chapter 3Yugi is so adorable! Cute story...finally a Tea and Yugi story. There are so few of them. Anyways please update! |
 Keyo-Red Angel of Hope 2005-04-24 . chapter 3Good to see you writing again. Hm...why do I sense the word 'Amnesia' coming up later.
You're good at manipulating the character's emotions, an this fic is even more promising than before, and you're writing is definatly improving, keep up the good work.
Oh, and Shark and his goons better watch out before there on the recieving end of the Melenium Brick! |
 sailor saphirepearl 2005-04-23 . chapter 3So far so Good Keep it up;)
(what a lame comment SORRY) well your story is good and your right there needs to be more straight stories! see ya |
 tai'sgirl23 2005-04-19 . chapter 3this is gd! please update soon! Yugi and Téa forever! |
 Lady Teela'Na 2005-04-19 . chapter 3Uh-Oh I smell trouble ahead for Tea. What will happen?
This was a good chappie. Please write more. |
 Keyo-Red Angel of Hope 2005-03-20 . chapter 2One request. Please try and improvce your grammer. The use of 'U' instead of 'You' hurts my head.
Other than that, you have a good set up with some nice detail, just improve your grammer a bit and you'll have a brilliant story. I'll be watching this one. |
 Darkfireblade 2005-03-19 . chapter 2It's quite humorous in some parts. Great way you put the storyline. Please continue writing this story. |
 Palidin 2005-02-02 . chapter 1PLEASE WRITE MORE!!
PLEASE? |
 Jizg 2004-12-01 . chapter 2eh...Keep it up ^_^ please ignore my YxA stories, they suck... |