   cricketchick1990 2005-10-20 . chapter 13nice story maylu being blind is a nice twist keep writing whats the pairing? |
 Obscured Clarity 2005-03-30 . chapter 13nice fic |
| Sheng.Long 2008 2005-03-09 . chapter 12 I notice you have watched at least the start of a certain episode of Axess, since you accurately described Mayl's Cross Fusion, and I love how you gave Mayl all the benefits Capcom gave Lan and Chaud.
Oh yeah, Some time in the future, Get some blond textures and 'dye' Protoman's hair for cutting Roll's hair! He deserves it! |
| White-Winged Darkness 2005-01-22 . chapter 2 hm have I reviewed any of your stories before? Do you not like Zero? ROAR! HOW DARE YOU NOT LIKE ZERO! Just for that... I don't like Roll anymore... |
| HigureCommando 2004-12-16 . chapter 13 Not as good as the last ending. Im almost possitive Cross Fusion deactivates automatically when theirs nothing to sustain it (a demensional Area). Dark-Man is a good guy in the EXE series by the way.
7.0/10 |
| HigureCommando 2004-12-16 . chapter 11 Cross Fusion doesnt seem to fit. You are altering the story altogether by giving her this information (cross fusion and stuff).
Warning Spoilers!
I would also like to say that late in Axess (Ep 42 to be exact) Maylu tries CF and fails.
7.0/10 |
| HigureCommando 2004-12-16 . chapter 9 Uh...aperantly you dont realize that Wacko-man is like 30 and Roll is 11.
Ew 7.5/10 |
| HigureCommando 2004-12-16 . chapter 4 Not bad, not bad. But Roll having to describe everything is getting a bit annoying.
7.5/10 |
| Shigore 2004-10-14 . chapter 13 Kewl. I'll wait for the sequel.
~Shigore |
 sunshard 2004-10-12 . chapter 13^_^ yay for Lan! Will you make another story continuing this? Doubt you can make much plot out of the remains, though...-_- *cough* I would say no offense but you told me not to. Great ending. |
| Maritta 2004-10-12 . chapter 13 I´m very happy with this chapter already, I mean the talk between chauld and maylu make me happy. |
| HigureCommando 2004-10-12 . chapter 2 Ya only had like 2 jokes. I dont see why they annoy you. He looks alot like protoman rather than Zero if you ask me (Sword and Long Hair, I know).
7/10 |
| HigureCommando 2004-10-12 . chapter 1 YOU SAID YOU DIDN'T LIKE MALYU/CHAUD YOU LIE!
7.5/10 |
| Jill 2004-10-12 . chapter 13 Yay this story was great thank you so much. Good bye for now. |
| bluedarkyugi 2004-10-12 . chapter 13 Half the fun in reading this fic is watching how Mayl overcome the difficulties that many people with sight problems overcome and a lot more.
I'm glad to know that there will be more of this series coming and that there are some people who aren't afraid to make a disabled person the star of a fic. |
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