What a cool story! I really like the interesting plot/setting... I can't tell which character to feel more sorry for.

Can't wait to see what comes next!

Yes, yes. I know it takes me forever to review. Better late than never though, eh?
Ooh, It's been so long since you last updated, I thought that I would have to read the whole thing over again to remember. But, as I started the new chapter, it only took me a few seconds ("who's POV is this? What're they talking about?") before it all came flooding back to me! "Oh! Leo an-and Mabe!...and then Raph! Oh, he's gonna be mad!" LOL

O.O oh boy...I don't know if Raph was really mad or not, but it looks like Donnie sure is!

I've told you before that this is one of my favorite fics, right? PLEASE update again soon!

I love it. ^_^

Ah! FINALLY! After so long, you finally updated! and a rather dramatically suspencful chapter, too! Mabe is a snake and she sure knows when to keep (or not) her mouth shut... I sure hope Don would hurt Leo, the poor turtle is already fuzzy and needs a vacation to clear his head... hope Raphie and Mike can help with this...

Whee! You updated! I was so surprised and excited! Once again, I adore the love and angst and general brotherhood. You write it so well. Please update soon! Thank you!

good come back chapter.. now that i am totally into it again.. more please

Another good story! ^_^

Leo's wife was Mabe!? Oh dear! And a missle? I'M assuming it's nucular... I find myself starting to look this new Donny.
You're right though I did have to read the last chapter over again to remind myself what was going on. Nice job on this chapter though dude! KUTGWUS
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This is a very heartfelt and well-told story. I also like that, in this story, the turtles have gone from being outcasts of society to being leaders of it! Talk about a switch!

Now, if only it hadn't taken a global disaster to allow that change. :| Anyway, keep writing.

Theres me thinking you've been abducted by aliens. Had to reread story You've still got the skill to turn out another good chaptor,dont take so long next time

You want scrutinizing? You got it! (stares intently at computer screen) Truth be told, I did have to go back and re-read everything, but it was worth it! Okay, back to the review I'm supposed to be doing.

This story is so cool...I'm so glad you've updated. They have like their own little government and stuff.

*sighs* So that's why Donnie doesn't like her. In that case...I don't like her either! Let me take this moment to say...Mabe is a poop. EEk! She was married to LEO? (blinks) Leo married a SNAKE?? Weird.

Uh oh. Leo made Raph mad. Oh wait. Raph's always mad. Heh, silly me.

I know I said I was gonna scrutinize, but I can't find anything wrong. Seriously.

I...cannot believe...you updated this! My gosh, how long has it been? I can't remember. But I do remeber that this fic is one of my favorites; so, yay!

Okay, I do NOT trust Mabe. Leo needs to stay far away from her.

Well, I hope you'll find the time to update (and I don't care which fic ^_~) again soon!

oh yeah, when your X start's chasing you, its hard to let go when you still have feelings towards her, ne? so very, very toubelsome... Mabe is still a snake, wonder how that mixes with being a turtle...

um, we're not gonna get any sappy flashbacks any time soon, are we?

MISSILE? @@;

Oh geez, we're dead X_x; I was wondering what really happened, all the tention and conversations really had me wondering. the brotherly reaction is cute, though xD

so no more humans, huh? what will happen if they actually still find one? and is Leather Head still there? is the earth still water and land or did everything dry up? from what i can tell, the fictions are seperated by vast land, and i'm getting the empression its all desert-like O_o;

more geographical details please, and please, PLEASE keep going!

A snake? A snake you say? Interesting! And quite fitting to say the least! I love the way you make all these secrets seem so goverenment like! It's so cool! Loved this chapter dude! KUTGWUS
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