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| Myra 2006-11-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis wasn't bad. i actually kind of liked it. We never really know what is going on inside Marcus' head so this was cool to put the story in his perspective. Although I don't really see Marcus as the type of guy that skateboards. But, the ending I really loved!!1 |
| Starlight77 2006-04-08 ch 1,  | abuseGreat characterization of Marcus. Really loved how you showed us how he had gotten into orgami. And ah, that poem... |
| .. 2006-03-25 ch 1, anon. | abusei dont see marcus skateboarding but do continue |
| chaos called creation 2006-01-04 ch 1, anon. | abusehehe its pretty good i like it. |
| Thessaly 2005-10-19 ch 1, | abuseOh. My. God. I'm one of those many, many teenage girls who went to highschool in suburbia and greeted the appearance of Jess with fervor equivalent to the appearance of the Messiah. We are also people who dream of Marcus Fluties, and thus your story becomes terrific. I love it. I wish I could read more...The last paragraph is perfect. Wow. Just...wow. |
| Draco's Secret Lover 2005-06-12 ch 1, | abuseCute. I spent quite a while trying to figure out exactly what style of note-folding could be considered a 'mouth'...I think I'll go with your story. |
| sanna14 2005-06-04 ch 1, | abuseI love those books...and marcus *sigh* if only he was real...that was pretty cool I reckon itd be really hard to get into marcuses head |
| Padfoot in Purple 2005-04-17 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely beautiful. Unfortunately, your Sloppy Firsts one-shot was the only fanfiction when I searched for Sloppy Firsts, but hey. You can't have everything. Anyway, I loved it--I just finished Sloppy Firsts two days ago, am reading Second Helpings, and Marcus is probably my favorite character. And before I type your eyes out (figuratively) I'll just end the review. ; ) Great story! ~Dessi |
| jules 2005-03-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseomg, that was so great! there are like, no Sloppy Firsts or Second Helpings stories on here, which is very sad. but urs was awesome! can u write another? please? |
| Anonymous 2004-12-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseI was skeptical about reading this at first, thinking no one could pull off the originality and feel of Sloppy Firsts, but I was wrong. This was awesome, it's such a great explanation to the mouth. Great job! |
| MagazineJunkie 2004-11-12 ch 1, | abuseGood Job. I love Sloppy Firsts and Second Helpings. This is the first fan fic that I've found. You did a really good job. Keep on writing! |
| Ragazza Doulce 2004-11-07 ch 1, | abuseHoly eff. Awesome story. You have a great way with words. Not only that but you made it about my favourite character in the book. :-P |
| Caley 2004-10-02 ch 1, | abuseCute. It's unique, too. I wouldn't have thought that. Good job :). |
| kait 2004-09-07 ch 1, anon. | abusehey it's painxrelevant from greatestjournal, and i'm in the comm for sloppy firsts. i'd like to congradulate you on writing this..it doesn't make him seem to out of character, althought it's particularly hard to imagine what his POV for ANYTHING would be.. it's pretty cool. =) |
| Jessica 2004-09-05 ch 1, anon. | abusei really liked that and im glad you posted it. I wish you luck om your other fanfics. and id be glad to read more. |