A good story about the most deadly assassin in the Realms. You definetly captured his personality, and your story is captivating. Your characters and how they view Entreri adds a lot to the story.It would be nice to know more, keep writing!

yay! you continued it!...now do it again, come on you can do it, please? :)

A fine story that makes it hard to blink for fear that I might miss part of it.

This story is really great so far

Very very good. I should give this four thumbs up. Heh, looks like we all liked Zak, we all liked Entreri and we all hate Drizzt.

Cool

This is awesome. All right, I've found a new favorite story! You're a great writer and you capture Entreri really well. So I have this strange liking for Jarlaxle and Entreri... ::sigh:: This is *awesome*. I love it. Next, part two! ::becomes click happy and goes to part two::

That's a fantastic story. Will Entreri end in the law-enforcement? ;) It would be kind of ironic. Please continue!

This is soooooooo good! Congrats. And keep it up.

Wow...that was awesome...I'm amazed. You do Salvatore proud!