 2weird2Btakenserious 2009-11-15 . chapter 14NO!! :ยด( |
 Polish 2008-12-20 . chapter 13Ah! I know you had some problems but darn it! update! I NEED to KNOW what happens next! please! I will give you cookies!-Chibi Naru appears and gives you puppy dog eyes, and holds up cookie, while oranges is in the background holding up a sign saying Chibi Naru comands you- Also, he could uses some saving from the perv Orchimaru. T_T -pulls out a shirt- "Help save our Naru-chan" is printed on the front. |
 fangirlwuv1212 2008-07-16 . chapter 1cool |
 kakashifanlS2ver 2008-06-14 . chapter 13u should really update=p
n u got some many spelling errors><
u keep switching wondering n wandering~ |
 OctoberThirtyFirst 2008-01-20 . chapter 2What a nice set of reviews you have! I almost didn't want to spoil it :) Well, this is turning out nicely! I like Haku! |
 Puffin Luv 2007-06-28 . chapter 12great story! |
 Sabaku no -X-Temari-X- 2007-06-14 . chapter 14Wahh! Don't worry, my hardrive went BOOM a while ago taking all the memory with it. T_T I had all my InuYasha story updates on it too. Now I have to start all the way over again.
Oh, some thing that I kept noticing was the 'toke' its actually spelled Took. I used to spell it toke all the time.
Hope you can get back up to speed soon. |
 x-EliteAssassin-x 2007-05-01 . chapter 14are you going to update this because it's really good! I really want to know what's going to happen to poor Naru, please update, its such a good story!
June
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 Reyinn 2007-04-14 . chapter 8neh, why not Kakashi and Iruka? I think it'll be cute! |
 NaRuKo77 2007-04-10 . chapter 14omg. I know what you are going through!! my hardrive crashed recently and I lost ALL my updates and story plots and ideas and pictures and everything to! *cries* I FEEL your PAIN!! *breaks down sobbing remembering everything that she lost* AH! *sob* I encourage you *sob* to update story!! *sob* don't AbandoN! *sob* WAH!!
having a mental breakdown,
NaRuKo77 |
 henriette 2007-03-27 . chapter 14since you've updated red slik you must be writting again...right? So I can expect a new chapter of dirty dancin ne ne? It was the most crule ckiffhang you left us with. Talk about leaving someone high and dry! |
 StupefiedNarutard 2007-03-26 . chapter 14NU, but why?
*ahem*
Anyways, omg, I totally love you!! I can't believe how undeniably wonderful this fic is! Freekin' brilliant. The characters are so very wonderful and fun to watch. Naruto is such the ultimate uke. (they made Puma shoes called uke? HOLY MOO COW!!XD)
Anyways, all of the characters are so wonderful and, even though Naruto didn't work for long, he still had a great time. I hate the fact that Itachi lost interest in Naruto so fast thoough (me loves ItaNaru). That made me almost cry. And then poor Naruto, he almost got rapeded by Orochimaru! And Haku was tookeded away by Haku! (why am I just restating what you wrote? I'm excited... sorry, it happens ^_^)
Oh, I exceptionally love the character that you've created for Kakashi-sensei... he's not like the other Kakashi's I've seen and that is a nice refresh! Plus, Iruka is so cute! (but the poor thing, I think I have an idea of what he went through) Maybe... hehe...
Anyways, Poor Naruto!! I can't believe he was poisoned like that (and that was a brilliant idea, brilliant I say, wonderful for developing the plot).
I like the way you described Naruto's breathing in the previous chapter... like a farting mouse. oh, I seriously laughed out loud for some retarded reason... I guess cuz it caught me off guard.
I did love the snippet of KakaIru since i think they belong together, in all respects. Kakashi was absolutely to die for.
I really love how most of the guys can be mistakened for girls, that is really hilarious since Naruto was initially attracted.
Omg, LEE! He is so damn funny. I didn't think it was him on his first appearance and you really caught me off guard.
I like how you incorporated the real Naruto into the story by that small Kage Bunshin!! you added when Iruka was trying to find a bathing suit.
You really are brilliant and I love this story so much.
Anyways, I really hope you are doing well in your university and that everything is going great for you! I know how it feels to have a ** up computer and no time to do anything. And losing valuable information. ( my 16 chapter story T^T, deleted...wai) I'm rooting for you Sooky! (you are so hilarious!)
Anyways, at the beginning I noticed a few mistakes in grammar and stuff, but as the story progressed I noticed you getting better. It just goes to show that writing fanfictions helps one's writing skills. Unless you had a beta or something... but that's only grammar-wise. Your skills in plot and ideas and stuff is perfect!! And I am seriously rambling so I better stop... ^_^ Thank you for such a wonderful story and hope everything works out for you. Hopefully, u can update again sometime and I will be waiting patiently.
lovelovelovelove,
stupefiedNarutard |
 Mina Hikari 2006-11-17 . chapter 14Wah, poor you and your computer! Good luck on finding an answer to help you! |
 Tamara2187 2006-10-01 . chapter 14when i saw dirty dancin on the top up my udated stories in my favorites i was like "OMG OMG SHE UPDATED :D" i was so happy, i was jumping up and down in my chair lol.
Just to get this horribly news |
 sillysinny 2006-09-27 . chapter 14 as a reader obsessed with your storeis, i feel really ssorry for you and myself...*sobs* i have no idea how i'm gonna live without your stories...anyway, cosplaying is nice XD you went as kon? |