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| LithiumLi3 2007-03-03 ch 4,  | abuseKAWAII!! I absolutely love this story, though I'm a little confused as to what happened... But I do love it! Please continue this as soon as possible. |
| Yume Li 2005-10-05 ch 4, | abuseYour story is very good. I wonder if Yuugi would ever go back home? Is your story called Lotus Flower? |
| storywriter10791 2005-09-06 ch 4, | abusethis is great! |
| Wren Truesong 2005-04-12 ch 4, | abuseWell he -did- come in during one of the best times of one's life to learn a language--that part actually makes more sense to me than Atemu's comment about not being good in bed. Puberty didn't generally start -that- early even for girls... so did you mean they really, physically, grow faster? Interesting. |
| DarkRemembrence 2005-04-03 ch 4, | abusemor...? |
| Atemu Yugi Lover34 2005-01-29 ch 4, | abuseThis story was awesome! Will u please update asap? |
| b.l.w. 2005-01-02 ch 4, anon. | abuseget yu-gi to have dream of where he came from then make him speak in japanese of what he saying atemu fonfused...hehehehee or bad dreams of his past or sad about missing his friends. |
| x Hearts 2004-12-15 ch 4, | abusereally cute!! ek...CONTINUE SOON! |
| Aislynn Goldleaf 2004-11-18 ch 4, | abuseThis is a riot! I love the interaction between these two, and the idea of them at 5! (well, nearly 6 in this chapter...) Looking forward to more childish antics (stealing food from the kitchens? climbing too high and having to be rescued after a frantic search? Of course, there's always the classic bucket of "something" suspended where it will cover the unsuspecting!!) |
| creaturesmint 2004-11-17 ch 4, | abuseOoh, wee fun! XD XD This is very sweet, and very funny. I love it! XD And in my option, I think yes, fast foward a year next chapter. ^^ Cant wait for the next chapter! XD Updating soon? ^_~ |
| JSR 2004-11-16 ch 4, anon. | abuseYay another chappie! I love this fic. Can someone please explain the whole ka and ba thing? I've seen mentions of it in other fics, but no one ever gives an explanation of what they are! Argh! I personally don't think Yuugi should inherit a Millenium Item, considering that he's already bound to the Puzzle. But this is your story, and what you say goes after all. Looking forward to more of this story! |
| Molly-Chan the AnimeGame Fa... 2004-11-16 ch 4, | abuseThis is truly amazing, it's just so beautifully written. So clear and smooth, though for them to be younger, yes, it really doesn't seem that way, but it's still very wonderful...I can only question. What was the deal with the first chapter? You might have answered this, and if you have, I am deeply sorry but I still must ask. What was the deal with the first chapter? You just suddenly changed it to an Ancient setting, as well as to the fact that I THINK you originally made Yuugi a baby and then he turned into a (*Checks*) five or less year old in a matter of minutes? I could be misunderstanding the transaction but it was still stunning on that. A: ... D: ... Yami: ^^; Me: WHAT!? A: You talked D: My brain is bleeding Yami: ^_^ Me: *Glares at Yami*...Ahem, anyway, this is pretty good though. I can hardly wait to read some more! |
| Tangie 2004-11-16 ch 4, | abusewow that was a good update am looking forward to the next update. |
| Sansi 2004-11-16 ch 4, | abuseYugi kisses Yami and Yugi didn't like it?!?!?!?! *falls down dead* |
| Ms Hobgoblin 2004-11-16 ch 4, | abuseIt feels like ages since you last updated! I really enjoyed it! Keep them coming... Hob x |