*Grabs Melanie-Anne, hugs her, squeezes her and sings her "Cree Craw Toads Foot Geese Walk Barefoot."* What you were expecting something else? LOL

A very nice drabble Mel, so nice to see you posting Pretender fic again! Write more soon! I miss you and your fics! *huggles*

A real drabble! You don't see those very often any more, people seem to have forgotten what they really are.

This is so well done! You've captured the essebce of the story, telling us everything we need to know, while hinting at so much more. It starts and ends perfectly! :)