 1withthepotionsseveroussnape 2009-12-03 . chapter 4 one word. genius!
i love this fic. |
 Veranex 2005-06-06 . chapter 6oh hurry hurry hurry hurry hurr y hurry huur y hurry hurr y hurry hurry hurry hurry huryrhruhhuryyhrurhrryruhruhruhurhruyruruyrhruhurry y shouls u hurry CAUSE I LOVED IT |
 QueenofAbstraction 2005-05-05 . chapter 6Harry Potter lego? LOL! Anyway, I likde your chapter a lot, but I don't think you've been keeping Harry and Dumbledore completely in character throughout the story. It's wonderful of course, I'd just like to suggest that you make Dumbledore more mysterious and try to refrain from making Harry swear so much. I love your plot so far!
-Abby |
 emma 2005-04-20 . chapter 6 and so it ends here. do u no lucy parker said reading ure fanfics was on her '2 do' list, claire has only read half, and hannah proudly says she's not read any. chuh. what bad taste. they (ure closest friends - well it sounds dramatic) haven't read them whereas i have! chuh! and given u the great pleasure of being able to laugh at me 3 mornings in a row! i wish i could read my destiny of what i could achieve. more over i wish i could stop time so i could actually do sum homework tonite. but then if u could stop time u'd half to go round the world fixing things and saving ppl and it would all b quite dull. gr. i wish i could mind read. thats the one. that would be brilliant. teachers minds...parents minds.. friends minds so definately...genius's minds (well i can already read my own mind)...i could read ure mind! hehe. bet u wouldn't like that. ah life would b so simpler. this way ure just half guessing most of the time. and mostly i'm wrong lol. but anyway i'll stop rambling. byex |
 trev 2005-04-20 . chapter 5 hehe i love the snake bit. the fic has personality. shame u didn't continue it but maybe it had nowhere 2 go. don't ever apoplogise for a LONG chapter. long chapters are good. short chapters are bad (but this was tres amusant). |
 oooooo 2005-04-20 . chapter 4 o interesting. liking it. STOP SAYING HARRY DEFEATED VOLDEMORT FIVE TIMES HE DIDN'T. HE DID ONCE. ONCE U FOOL. damn actually twice. he just stopped voldemorts plan in year 1 and 4 and 5. not defeated him. stop making him so damn cocky. he more than anyone knows its half chance (but only half). add more things into ure current fic like these good little magic ideas - it reminds u its a fic based in a magic world which otherwise u kinda don't notice. its jsut a girl and her teacher. |
 emma 2005-04-20 . chapter 3 its not as different as other fanfics as poss but has really good ideas :-D like the mood paint. its all very good and the characters are great tho u just hate ron and hermione getting along dont u lol? u made them all get less owls than i imagine ESPECIALLY HERMIONE! THINK CLAIRE TIMES TEN! i mean u ten times...we're talking boffs here aren't we?? jks jks. cough - B4 - cough. kidding. |
 grrr 2005-04-20 . chapter 2 no this is not right tut tut. pensieves aren't already filled with memories. they are to put in memories that r crowding ure head. completely different. it would b empty. more over y did u say he pulled out a glistening silvery white strand of hair? thats dumbledore u dumb **. he has BLACK hair. lmao. |
 emma 2005-04-20 . chapter 1 kk. don't u feel kind of that u'v just appeared out of nowhere into my class?? (not ure class of course lol - i'm not self centred, it just happens that the world revolves around me). anyway writnig is good. crawpy i no, but spanna? hu's spanna? |
 Whirlyblue 2004-11-25 . chapter 6 Hey! I don't know whether I reviewed this story before, but since I didn't log in, I don't think it would matter. Great story, are you going to carry on? At school right now, so see you later! |
 mollziki 2004-11-16 . chapter 6 oh excitement! sorry i havent reviewed for a while, ive only just read the whole chapter. anyway, keep it up. oh and you said lighted and i think that you meant lit? either that or harry has an aversion to grammar like me. hang on, that doesnt make sense... oh well... |
 witchintraining 2004-11-01 . chapter 6good chapter... pity you are ignoring me, but next chapter please lay off Harry? Just a little? Cos its getting pretty deep here. And i posted something! Have you read it? You didn't reveiw, and i reveiw every chapter you write *sniff sniff* And, yes, your lego is very cool. |
 whirlyblue 2004-10-20 . chapter 5 there, i've sent you quite a few reviews in the last few days, haven't I? very nice story, VE-ER-RY nice. |
 whirlyblue 2004-10-20 . chapter 4 Hey! Great story. I am sitting at the computer on the row in front of you, and everyone else is doing their stupid project, ha! |
 WhirlyBlue 2004-10-19 . chapter 3Jeez! Carlotta (or however you spell your name in Spanish) that was amazing. I liked the wallpaper. v.v.v.v. cool. u r so much better than me. gr. |