Nice story so far! I like the way you did Slartibartfast (sp?) and Random. And Zaphod...and the waiter...what the heck, all of it :P Keep writing, *gives you a cookie* i'm waiting for the next chappie.

hoopy

hehehe i love this writing! so very very good. the style is great. i love 'take the stairs'. y do u not continue with this?? its great! did i already say that? but u just HAD to involve SOMETHING twisted, so we got the falling out boobs and ** and perverted Zaphods. tut tut.

fun fun fun. i'm loving it. little quirky things like the books (or radio series) have. loving the why on Earth (well on Lamuella at any rate) she had to be related to this primitive ape descendant carbon based life-form. great sentence. u've really captured the unique style of writing. thats whats so easy about harry potter; there is no unique style of writing. unique plot and characters and great ideas, but the writing itself is like cucumber. very good but no flavour.

thats weird

hehe! I love fun. There was fun there. Hehe. You have recreated his style so accurately, wow.

...this is going to sound so cheap... Please go and read my story.