i read this in one night it was so good, at first i had the impresion ryou was a wee lad but then with yugi and malik it kind of was confusing but still great, oh and love the part in the end where yami scares maalk and says i know you, killer genius.

I love the way you did the selfharm. Great. Please continue, I love this story.

this is SO awesome. please continue!

On the whole I found this a very good story. The writing is excellent and I liked your plot. It's sort of an... AU but roughly following cannon, which is intreaging to read.
I think that your characterisaiton of the Yami's is superb, especially Bakura (frighteningly enough I very much related to the last pragraph of this chapter. Heh. Dark stuff, but yeah...) However I do think Ryou is a bit... childish and Yugi a bit... secure. From my experience reading the Manga and watching the show, Ryou seems to be the more mature one to begin with, if anything. You write him here as if he is very young, which doesn't quite fit in a way... But maybe it's just me.
On the whole though this is a wonderfuly engaging fic and I'm going to go and add it to my favorites right now! I hope you ad more too!

gr8 story

that was interesting . your a verry good writer . i like the way you discribe everything . please write more soon !

Definitely one of the best stories I've read on fanfiction so far. The naive Ryou does make me cringe on occasion, but it's kind of funny how Yami Bakura deals with him, just barely managing to contain his temper. And the fact that this fic is about my three favorite characters certainly helps.

Interesting. I liked how you mentioned that bit about the homework being sent to the Shadow Realm. ^^
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Well, I finally got around to reviewing. It took me long enough. Sorry for the delay. Great chapter! I really, really, really like the way you portray all the evil, psychoticness(is that even a word?) of Yami Bakura. The Shadow Game was neat too, but I thought it took place on the roof of the school... ovell, you have the right to change it. ^^ ttyl!

Mana: Well, Bakura's just having the time of his eternal life! MUHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Mana: (growls) IF BAKURA HURTS RYOU I'LL-Erm..I'll...Smack him with a frying pan! Yeah! That's it...This is cool! WILL READ ON!

Mana: Wohho! This rules!

Leila: GO BAKURA!

Lindsey: Ryou's better!

Leila: IS NOT!

Lindsey: IS TO!

Leila: IS NOT!

Lindsey: IS TO!

Leila: IS NOT!

Lindsey: IS NOT!

Leila: IS YOO!

Lindsey: Ha! ^_^

Mana: We will read on! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAAYAY!

Hi hi! woot updatage! i wuz missing u *tear* but u ish back so i be happy ^-^ i hope ur internet lives long enough to maybe email me sometime? i miss them =( well hope u get more writing done and i cant wait to hear from u ^-^ Lates!

*waves from #1 Fan booth*

Captivatingly done, not dissapointing at all. I especially liked the squabble between the two Egyptians, very entertaining. lol. I'm glad this is finally updated, and well worth the wait. I hope to read more soon. See ya. ^_~

Great chappy! It's been awhile since I've had the pleasure of reading something from you. I certainly am not dissapointed! This was another great chapter to another great fic!