Lovely. Just absolutely lovely. Well done.

nice peom! Can relate it alot to the movie, and thats a good thing here on fan fiction. Some movies are based on real life, and people don't think so, and they write about it and it just seems weird. But in this poem, you can acualy relate it to Holly, which is awsome 'cause Audrey Hepburn rules!

Very nice. I enjoy the movie as well.

You captured something I could empathize w/.

Intersting. Neat poem.

This is very nice. I like how you got into her head like that.