Love this one shot.

it was good i loved

I like it

You have no idea how happy I was when I found this fic. I read it on my first account (this is my third) when you submitted it, and it was basically the most amazing thing I'd ever read. Recently, I started writing Cleon again and was thinking how much I'd like to find 'that one fic I really liked' and then I just happened to come across it.

But anyhow, I love this just as much as I did when I first read it. It's wonderfully written, and of course it's a lovely pairing, and I pretty much just love everything about this. -runs around and fanboys-

So, yeah... I can't thank you enough for writing this inspiring fic. You made a little boy very happy today :33

That was awesome! I'm starting to really like this pairing ^^

awaza!

m shmexy and very well written.

Ooh! Very good! Very good indeed! Muy caliente! The characterization was down to a science. It bothers me immensely when people portray Cloud as a completely submissive uke when he can be a little fircracker! ;) Thanks for writing this. It made my day. =)

Amazing fic! I especially liked your use of Cloud's wing in the last part of the fic; it's something that I haven't run across in fics before. Plus, it's LeonxCloud, so how could I not like it?

Thanks for the great read!

~*Hawk*~

Aw, aw, aw, aw, aw, aw! *squeals* The day I can write something like this is the day that I consider myself an accomplished (fanfic) author. Great way to lead up, the suspense just built up and up, and broke off in a way that left you breathless and shocked. I'm shivering in ecstacy. Weird as that sounds, I guess that's a nice way to put it... lol. *shiver* It was so good, I don't know how to describe it... the hidden tension, the characters were incredibly done, and the whole thing so different ... this isn't the way the storyline actually goes in KH though ,is it? Cause I'd never heard of Seph Cloud and Squall growing up together, or even meeting (though I know they do in KH2)
*checks all four boxes* I'll be reading this again someday, and I'll leave a more thorough review, mark my words. I have to ... lol, research this, to see what was about it that made me just... shiver, and really become breathless. Anticipation, emotion, Squall's acceptance of CLoud and CLoud's reluctance? THe image of Cloud straddling Squall shirtless and both dripping wet? Hm... I think that might be a good part of it... *laughs*
Totally incredible! *swoons again*

oh, squee! i love cloud/leon, but this was... like.. beyond lovable. It was AMAZING. Favs!

I came from the HP fandom but it seems that the KH fandom has alot more promising slash :P

That was majorly cute! Nice job, excellent work!

hottest. story. ever. very well written. i love how unsure cloud was. and leon was so sweet!

SQUEE! now this is how it SHOULD have happened XD lol! nah, i love SS (just read the chapter where cloud and leon actualy meet, twas v good, groovi even, but i was just screaming for leon to just JUMP cloud!) loved how you did everything envolving the wing, though i would have loved it if you had made the claw a perminant appendage also, hehe, think of all the kinky potential, ne? o, good thinking on the vincent thing, the simmilarities between KH style cloud and good old vinnie are just too blatent to miss, ne?

anyhu! great writing, great story!
go you! :)

*sits phweeing for a while* yay that was so cute! i wish you could write more to it, cos that was a great fic^^.