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| relic yuy 2006-12-12 ch 10, | abuseI am very glad that Doug and Jack are ok now but I am pretty disappointed that Jack didn't apologize. I think Doug certainly deserved it. |
| RadicalSmile 2005-04-25 ch 2, | abuseIt's good. |
| qsmadness007 2005-04-05 ch 11, | abusevery interesting story, I think you captured all of them well. The one thing that struck me is in one of the episodes it implies that Doug can cook, but the whole episode of him "trying" to cook, and Tobey saying it wasn't that bad was funny. The whole thing was wonderful. Keep up the good work |
| Jack Doug 2005-02-04 ch 11, | abuseOutstanding writing! It was really good, congratulations! In thoses scenes really cold, I could feel the cold (Even if here is really hot)... The Jack/Doug dialogues were amazing, I can't wait to you do more stories with them. THe only thing I didn't like is the fact that Jack still have regrats with his father, even after that talk beetwen then in "True Love"... JAck is much stubborn in this case... Well, this was only my second fanfic, and the standarts are really high! The dialogues come to perfection! Please, don't stop write! |
| MadScientistGirl 2005-01-25 ch 11, | abuseI have really enjoyed reading this story. I always wondered what had happend to Tobey, and so it was nice to see him again. |
| dahoodilie 2005-01-03 ch 11, | abuseyeah go ahead and submit them bye |
| Jewelbaby 2005-01-02 ch 11, | abuseSequell I love Jack/doug stories. |
| Sam Cdn 2005-01-02 ch 11, | abuseI'm sad that this story is over, but happy that we got a happy ending! I love the way you write about Jack and Doug and their life together- the way you add details like Jack not being able to work the video recorder! Even if you don't write another chapter to this story, I hope you start another Jack/Doug one soon, because that would make me (and other people, I'm sure) very happy! Thank-you for writing this brilliant story! -Sam |
| ReRe04 2005-01-01 ch 11, | abuseThank you very much for your kind words. I really liked this chatper. It was a great way to wrap up the story, but a sequal would always be appreciated! :) And I'll definitely be there for your next venture. |
| keataru 2005-01-01 ch 11, | abuseFirst off Happy New Year, I hope this year brings a lot of joy for you. Regarding this great fic, the only sad thing for me is that it is now over. I mean Jack and Doug are good, Tobey and Gareth...are somewhat good, but hey I want to smack Tobey for kissing Jack like that, lol. Any way you did such a terrific job with it and I can't wait to see what else you have in store for the future. The "Or maybe" in your A/N just about killed me because if you do a sequal...well lets just say I won't stay still until it's out :P Also I got the email you sent me and I emailed you back. Kea |
| Sam Cdn 2004-12-30 ch 10, | abuseAnother great chapter! As usual, I love Jack and Doug. Their strong, powerful love was described beautifully. And as for Tobey ... aw, poor Tobey! I want him to be happy with Gareth, but something tells me Gareth will never quite be enough for him. That kiss ... well, I just really hope it doesn't hurt Jack and Doug! And I hope that Tobey will be OK. Keep writing! -Sam PS Just in case you didn't get my e-mail, I got your e-mail and yes, I would love to be part of your community! |
| keataru 2004-12-28 ch 1, | abuseerr, what was up with Tobey? >_>; I hope that gets resolved, in that Tobey goes far far away. Yes I'm a Jack/Doug type of guy, and I adhored the scenes that you wrote them in. It was so sweet. great job and happy holidays :D |
| ReRe04 2004-12-28 ch 10, | abuseAnother great chapter! |
| Bibis 2004-12-17 ch 1, | abuseHi Well I think that the idea of your story is good, but I also think that something is missing. Maybe you could are some more interesting details. |
| keataru 2004-12-16 ch 9, | abuse::Way too sappy? Corny?:: I don't think so, I think it was perfect and great, you've got a talent for writing these situations with depth and passion. I can't wait for the next chapter ^^ |