Isn't 5786 the number tattooed on Raiden's chest...? Since I doodle him a lot, I remember the sequence quite well. Perhaps it's the same organization that did that to him! O.O Wah!! I wanna read more...please keep it up!

Dude! You can't do this to me. Why it did just END?!

Please write more. Good MGS fiction's really hard to find...

This is a very interesting story, and an nice twist at the end of this chapter. I'd like to see more of this. Keep up the good work! ^_^

Whoa, cool! This is a nice one! I love fics that try to get into Snake's head. Please continue. And hey, any chance of Raiden being thrown into the mix?

First off, I'd like to say I love the name you chose. It's pretty. ♥

I know the twist for this fic and so I'm waiting for it because I'd love to see how you write it. Mohaha. E.

I like your Snake. He makes me laugh, and I personally like this in first person, even though it would have worked in third, just because first person Snake is... awesome. And you get to see that much more of his character, which isn't a common occurance.

I root for some form of yaoi to happen later on, but that's just me. XD and I want yaoi all the time no matter what, so... >_>;

Keep writing. T_T I like it.

This is really cool, man. Really makes me wonder: What the hell's going on? Can't wait for the next part.