I love the ending, it had me smiling and almost tearing. :) the Sheelos here was beautiful, and the angst leading up to even it more so. just so I have this right, they were resting at Flanoir before going to Volt, correct?

Aw that was nice :)
I love ZelosxSheena; opposites do attract! XD
i am such a late reviewer, but oh well, haha

Sheena is a little out of character, but just a tinsy bit. I love the story and At the beginning and all the way through it, I never noticed Sheena was out of character, until i read it again and even then i barely noticed it. Wonderful job.

This is so good!
I don't even know what to say...

A thousand bonus points for you!

Very nice, I liked it a lot. Is it too much to hope that you'll continue? ^^ Please? And don't worry about messing up with the game flow. That's what makes it interesting to read!

It was really good. I really liked it. Write more fics!

Hmm, I could've sworn I reviewed to this...hmm, oddness. Well, I lovsis it!

Sorry for not reading these sooner. It took a while for me to actually get somewhere in this game XD
But, back to the review! Yay for Sheena and Zelos fluff! Zelos is such a great character. Better than Lloyd any day >D And they weren't out of character either. You're too good to let that happen.

Off to review your other TOS fics! :D
~Perfect Soldier 01

That was good!

ME LOVE

well! very cute and fluffy. really. Fluff and angst really do go well together cause that means that someone needs comforting...::smiles evilly:: well, i really enjoyed this, so keep up the marvelous work!
Karana Belle

Fantastic. I love Zelos.

Poor Sheena;I just made a pact with Volt in the game.The story was so sad.Your fic carries the emotions well.ZelosxSheena XD

Hey, this is a great story. You should write some more tales stories. But thats just my opinion.

You didn't mess up the game.

Dark Link: Yeah, he did.

Shut up! You just wait! I'll atone for my sins!

Dark Link: Sure, yup.