keep going!
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Darkest Dreamz

nice chapter! keep going!
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Darkest Dreamz

great chapter! update sooN! as i said watch the grammar and all will be perfect.
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Darkest Dreamz

sorry for taking so long to review...that reminds me...o crap i still gotta update "Pieces of My Life" but great chapter! update!
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Darkest Dreamz

UPDATE IT! UPDATE IT! UPDATE IT! UPDATE IT! UPDATE IT! UPDATE IT! UPDATE IT! UPDATE IT!
*(sniff) Puhlease (With puppy eyes)*sniff*

Write more (with puppy dog eyes) puh lease ( more puppy-dog eyes)

Great story, I'm adding you to favorite author now so that I can check back, k? ttyl!

hm... well... im done... bbut i dont know what advice to give you... i like your story so keep writing

intersting... NEXT!

wow!... your story is really original, sry took so long to update... im a slow reader...
ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!

plz plz continue this is getting very good!

UPDATE SOON!
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Darkest Dreamz

o damn! girl problems for li! DUN DUN DUN! hehe update!
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Darkest Dreamz

hahaha! the glaring! woohoo! nice chapter! keep it up! as i said all you need to work on is the grammar!
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Darkest Dreamz

*drools* hey is this yukio dude that hot? ehehehehehe lol nice chapter! i only suggest that you look through your grammar and the story will be perfect! i'll be reading the next chapter!
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Darkest Dreamz