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Reviews for: The Right Man
Julianmon
2008-06-25 . chapter 1
Ha, Ha, HA, HA ha,ha,ha, I can't stop laughing!
Serena Venditto
2005-12-16 . chapter 1
This was a good fic but man! It was so out of Character! You really let your imagination run wild. Try to be more real with the characters next time, please!
TharzZzDunN
2005-09-23 . chapter 1
Interesting and thought provoking. I was especially pleased to see someone writing so many young ladies in one place and no one was being held at swordpoint. An excellent chapter in a life, I look forward to more of your writing.
happosai's eviler twin
2005-08-25 . chapter 1
I loved your fic! I just hope you wright more bath tub fics with butt lashes,hehehehe...
Jaeiyola
2005-07-17 . chapter 1
Aw, this is so sweet. I love the idea of the Nerima Wives Bridage. The ladies' secret talking, ah, going into my favorites to be read later on. Thanks!
kkw
2005-06-14 . chapter 1
I loved it, it was so great. good job
Jennyroseangel
2005-02-24 . chapter 1
funnily hilarious. ^^ go you. woot
dracolov
2005-01-12 . chapter 1
HA HA! I LOVE IT!
Sakamoto
2004-11-03 . chapter 1
This was good.
EvilP
2004-09-06 . chapter 1
Nice story. I like the commenting by the guys throughout a lot. I'm surprised there wasn't any cold water so Mousse would have turnd into a duck incapable of shutting off the valve.
obsidian-fox
2004-09-06 . chapter 1
While it was sweet, I don't know if this really qualifies as a 'Humor' fic. I'm not particularly fond of Ranma-Akane matchups; as such I'd add that Ranma never did say "I love you" at Jusendo; the words were in a thought bubble, not a speech bubble. However, you did yours well enough.

I can't really see the fiance' brigade ever getting together in a room without destroying it.
The Liz
2004-09-05 . chapter 1
Oh god that was rich! Absolutly wonderful! That was great! ... By the way, I really liked it^_^
fairywings81
2004-09-05 . chapter 1
Very good! Write more like this!
Jupiter Pickels
2004-09-05 . chapter 1
This was very good. Are you going to end it here, or continue it? I hope maybe a slight continuation.
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