Dude, huray for GL and Shay! I'm a tad confused with the ending though, but alot of things do, I have no idea how many times I've written this but ya, anyhoo can't wait for the sequal, I want more HG/GL!

Peace out and rock on!

oh my...yay to HG/GL, can't wait for the sequel!

Cute. I liked the story, but the ending seemed a bit rushed. Otherwise, good job.

I LOVE this story! I had every intention going into reading chapters 6-8 of reviewing each chapter - BUT I JUST COULDN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT WOULD HAPPEN NEXT!

This story has certainly become one of my favorites! It's well-written, well-crafted, and the depth of the characters are wonderful (HG and GL ^^). I can't wait for the next chapters!

Oh, quick question: Those villains, or some of them at least, don't know the secret identity of Batman? I thought they might... Well, you would know better than I! I just wanted to know if that is really true in the comics and what-not.

Take Care!, M*Me

Dude, bumer bout Hawkgirl, still waiting for GL to catch up to her over here, oh and I don't think I mentioned this before but great job with Zatanna, I did read somewhere that she likes to cast spells backwards. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

Peace out and rock on!

Dude, another awsome chapter, I especilly liked the part with Chi and Lantern, can't wait till they catch up to Shay, then we get to see some more sparks fly^_^ UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

Peace out and rock on!

Hey oh what's gonna happen ?
Why is she in the surgery room ...? Are they gona torcher her ?...poor Savage having villian syndrome ...lol wack wack wack *wack vandel savages her off wall *hey this is fun !

Supervillian syndrome. Ha! Where would our superheroes be without it? Dead?

Loving this. Keep it up! Hawkgirl is pitying herself, living only because she must. Very well written.

interesting...I really like Chi...though sad didn't add that she purposely lost ah well, lol, minor detail. Go find that girl!

oh more me likeys ...I want more I wanna see Hawkgirl bash someone ...

Dude, so not cool about Shay, things had better start lookin up for her pretty soon, and GL had better get to her in time incase she doesn't come to her sences in time! UPDATE SOON!

Peace out and rock on!

This is one very unique story! You did a good job incorporating your own characters (who are awesome, by the way - the tribe and Adam, right?) into the story with the classic characters. It's cool to see so much villain interaction, too! It's like a DC Comic villain convention! Ahem... Bad pun aside, I am enjoying this story very much and very excited to read the next chapters! Thanks!

Peace, M*Me

"The both of you are to report to Green Lantern's office. As soon as possible." The screen clicked off. After a second it came back. "With pants this time." Then it shut back off. I sighed. One time I forget such a little thing, and no one ever lets me forget it.
- I laughed when I read this! That's so great!

This story is certainly building up to something huge right now! I am eager to read more, so here I go to chapter 5!

-M*Me

O... Ivy and Savage... LOL.

This is quick becoming a VERY dramatic story! I hope that the premonition is false in at least some way - that Hawkgirl is not really a future traitor. I REALLY want to see what happens, so I am going to cut to the chase and move on to chapter 4! ^^ - I'm excited to read more (hey, that rhymes)!

-M*Me

Okay... I am a little confused, but I think I understand... Hawkgirl was accepted into a tribe after the events of "Starcrossed", where she fought alongsidethe tribe's people. Now, at the threat of being banished, she decides to resign. Meanwhile, Adam is having premonitions which include Hawkgirl, and Green Lantern knows it. At the same time, a band of villains is trying to hunt down Hawkgirl so that they may destroy the League... Okay. I think I have it...

This story, though a little difficult to follow at times, is very well-written. You are doing a very good job keeping everything straight - really! The story is just a complex one. It's very creative, though ^^. I'm looking foward to reading the rest! So on to chapter three!

Peace, M*Me