okay lemme just say how much i LOVED it... Bean. ha! hahahahaha... *ahem* you three are real talented with writing... that, and Jak 3 was an AMAZING game :)

If you ever do something liek this again, i'd love to be apart of it! :)

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Wow! I am very, very impressed!

I like it very much so far, it doesn't seem Sueish at all, and it was very unique.

Eh, I spose my profile was a bit harsh. *shrinks*

But I am much looking forward to reading the rest of this.

this must be my fave chapter so far...lol, echoing bean! i get what you said in the beginning baout how the oracle says soemthing funny...i can so see that. keep up the good work, and i can't wait to see what happens next to you three!

emem like! E!

Carmen: are you still hyper? that's it! i'm taking over. great story, it rules!

AYIE! Good, good, good, good chappie! I like it! E! ::Dies happy and comes back to life to finish review.:: Yays! I really like this, and I really think that it would be soo good if you don't change a dang thing. It's perfect. All of you are just great in this, and are coping with it ... pretty 'well'. Just remember, DON'T CHANGE ANYTHING! Unless you're catching typos, then go for it!

Jaks-Girl

wooT! hmm whats up with eko beans i mean i'd be scared if i was still glowing to! can't wait for an update. don't hurt beans it is not very nice!

hehehe beans... nice split less repetitive. ilike better than other chapters.

i think this may be the mest chapter so far! awsome

I love these 'I got sucked into the game' stories! But wouldn't it be better if you make each chapter one of your povs? Just asking. But me like story!

BWAHAHA! Shady! Youre just like me! but Austrailian! (Which really is thebest country in the world, next to japan, because both produce some pretty sexy dudes.) I even drew a pic of you yesterday, because I had nothing better to do. It looks bad. I only had markers.

You guys are so totally kikin, and I'm waiting impatiently for the next chapter!

Lemme tell ya. You never cease to amaze me! Continue updating!

very gd, written true to the story ark and is very well adapted. i however feel it is a bit too repetitive..i mean i get how u want us all to know how each of u reacts but i still feel that maybe you could lengthen the points of view each time so it doesn't end at the same place all the time and then start up where the person left there point of view u know? if not well then i don't know wat to say.. yes i knowit reads really complicated but hopefully u can figure out wat i mean

Dude! kikin chapter! i can only wait to play the actual game, and not a sample game in wal-mart. (I got stepped on 1 too many times...)Perhaps i shall be able to relate a bit more to the story when i do.

Shady, you sound like my mom with the whole csi/dead things shows. She watches those all the time...

But yes,all three of you, you have worked long and hard to produce a very good chapter! i shall be eagerly waiting for the next!

Cool! Kontinue with this! It's awesome!

Excellent! Fantastic! Splendid! Marvelous! Did i mention it was good? UPDATE SOON! It would be cool if i could get your email adress, so i could ask you a questoin in private.

PS My story, "An Ancient Soul", is going to have a Jak 3 sequel... The question I have is related to that.