oh that was so funny, please update soon.

hey babe, u figured about updating? im pretty sure im not the only one waiting...

luv ya

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very interesting fanfic. Normally, I don't like the way authors write GSR but your's was quite entertaining. Will be waiting for the next chapter! More Power!

Finally an update! I thought that was great! I was waiting for so long for you to update this and here it is! That was very funny and i like the plot your story is taking!

Sorry to see the flame! Anyways, good chapter, remember not to write how you speak (you know what I mean, really fast without pausing) and be quicker to update this time. Luv ya.

(No capslock this time!)

Catherine seeing Greg beginning to rifle through some of the piles of things on his desk quickly said. “Well before you start macgyvering something out of the equipment here how about I suggest we use matches?”

ok, i just have to show this quote because i am absolutly in love with a show where richard dean anderson is the lead. so yeah, you just made my day. Keep posting, bye

no offense intended here, but your story is just riddiculus. i'm sorry, but it seems you use no logical reasoning, and write purely fantasy. work places do not operate like this. there are so many reasons why it is a bad idea for a supervisor to become intimate with one of his subordinates, and none of his employees would willingly try to set their co-worker up with their boss, not only for ethical reasons but for fairness. and while i am not necessarily the most avid viewer of the show, i have seen enough to see that the so-called chemistry between gil and sara is non-existant, purely fantasy. there is no comprehendable attraction there-hell, they aren't even on first name basis. all i can hope is that you and other writers will 1)follow the plot-driven focus of the show with your writing *cases, not personal lives* and 2)incorporate logic. give your stories a parallel with the way the writers create the characters on the show rather than imposing your own thought of how they should act.

I can't wait to see how this conversation turns out.

ohh i cant wait until u update this next so thanks for another excellent chappie

This is GREAT! keep up the good work.

Yeah! you finally updated, love this chapter and cannot wait for the next one

Finally, you updated. Very good, nice humour, just make sure your sentences don't get too long next time. What about the other fics? You working on those? Hurry up, coz the wait for mine is killing me.

Now some constructive criticism before I go watch my programme. Hmm...Well like I already mentioned, break up your sentences a bit more, and maybe try to slow it down a bit. I know everyone pesters you to update but if I have time to give a proper review when my programme is on, you should have time to write a longer chapter that is carefully checked over.

Constructive enough?

Let's see...ending on a positive note...I enjoyed it as usual. Now all you gotta do is get the guys to work on Grissom, so (no pressure here) move your fat arse and update soon. If I can sit around doing nothing despite the mocks you can write another chapter. Now I really gotta go, I'm missing it all because of you. Update :-)

True story: I went to Best Buy over the summer with some friends since they were having a "back to school" sale. This dude that worked there hovered around the doors and the security. I got close enough to read the tag on his shirt: "Loss Prevention Manager". Basically, the bouncer who makes sure no one shoplifts. Read George Carlin's books (a genius in my opinion) for more of these titles and other PC language and phrases that have unfortunately entered our lives.

(tune of Head Shoulders Knees and Toes)

U-P-D-A-T-E

A-T-E

U-P-D-A-T-E

A-T-E

U & P & D-A-T-E-E

U-P-D-A-T-E

Sorry, I'm hyper, but UPDATE!

A garbologist, huh? Who comes up with this stuff? Please update, I really like this story.