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James' Lily Flower
2007-10-13 . chapter 1
Cool! You should so carry this on with a reply from James and then how their 7th year goes. Love SG xoxo
Galileo's Daughter
2006-03-19 . chapter 1
I don't think Lily would sound so harsh and business-like, I think she has a sense of humor, so I dunno what I think about this characterization of her.

But I like this nonetheless--it's funny but in a demure sort of way.
ArtemisiaQuill
2004-09-06 . chapter 1
Very amusing. I assume that a letter from James is to follow? I liked the sarcasm that Lily used, I thought it most appropriate. *smiles* I ma intirested in seeing where you will take this story! Don't forget to update...For future refrance, please space between paragraphs, it makes it easier to read that way!
persona
2004-09-05 . chapter 1
hi! i like this its good but its seems more like a begginning to a story than a one shot...i think u should have him answer her ^-^ good job ~me
Miska
2004-09-05 . chapter 1
This is cute!! You know you can't just leave it there though...you have to write a sequel now ;-) LOL and I liked "So help me Godric"- that was funny! And the Congratulations at the end was just plains weet :-) Good job with this!
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