 James' Lily Flower 2007-10-13 . chapter 1Cool! You should so carry this on with a reply from James and then how their 7th year goes. Love SG xoxo |
 Galileo's Daughter 2006-03-19 . chapter 1I don't think Lily would sound so harsh and business-like, I think she has a sense of humor, so I dunno what I think about this characterization of her.
But I like this nonetheless--it's funny but in a demure sort of way. |
 ArtemisiaQuill 2004-09-06 . chapter 1Very amusing. I assume that a letter from James is to follow? I liked the sarcasm that Lily used, I thought it most appropriate. *smiles* I ma intirested in seeing where you will take this story! Don't forget to update...For future refrance, please space between paragraphs, it makes it easier to read that way! |
 persona 2004-09-05 . chapter 1 hi! i like this its good but its seems more like a begginning to a story than a one shot...i think u should have him answer her ^-^ good job ~me |
 Miska 2004-09-05 . chapter 1This is cute!! You know you can't just leave it there though...you have to write a sequel now ;-) LOL and I liked "So help me Godric"- that was funny! And the Congratulations at the end was just plains weet :-) Good job with this! |