This fic was amazing. Characterization was perfect. To see Youko lose control of her emotions was so powerful.

My favorite part was the last scene. With Sei and Yukie-san:

"I'll take it to her, next time I pass by."

"Soon, I hope. I think she'll miss it."

"Then she'll come back for it."

I love the ambiguity of the converstion. They could really be talking about the purse, or they could be talking about Sei herself. This was a great piece of work.

I loved your fanfic as well as your insights on the fairy world of marimite. I have to say I agree on all accounts. The character development and plot thankfully, were very pausible unlike many fanfics and this has to be one of my favorites.

Wicked. Please write another if you have time. I actually thought it one of the best Ive read.

the end of a fairytale? hmm, i cant say much, i just read and enjoy the fics that is, i don really like to think much about something, hey noone say i was smart^^ but i liked the story you written here, through i would have prefer the fairytale to last, this is your fic and i respect that. at least i hope my review convey that.

Thos has got to be the best marimite fanfic I've read so far. Thanks for writing it, I enjoyed it a lot!

'that coming from her hurt'- I'm not sure about the wording on that one.
'looked scarily what'- looked scarily like what
It was, indeed, interesting. Bittersweet, open-ended(for me, anyway), and a bit /lingering/, somehow. Not sure why that word came to mind. I did love it though.
~Naolin

umm i just had to add this to alerts i havnt read yet though sry im sure its good

nice... There were a few typos here and there, but I liked it.

its good. you should make another one...

...words cannot do justice to how much ** this fic kicked...

AWESOME.

I really, really liked the fic. It's one of the best ones out there. Any chance for more??

~Rin

As always Shigan, this affects me. Man does it affect me *chuckle* You write with such a sensuality. Not over the top, not overly graphic but still powerful enough to evoke a response in your readers (and some might wish that response wouldn't be evoked while they're sitting in their office reading this LMAO! Gives people WAY too many ideas about how to use a desk, ne?) Excellent stuff!

Maybe not Lilian-ish in the calm, collected sense, but absolutely the best Marimite fanfic I've ever read. Great job, especially with Sei's inner voice, and the fact that this didn't dissolve into a pitiful angst-fest or anything. The two of them are far too level-headed to try and warp their lives around their relationship, but neither would they ignore what they could've had. Fantastic. ^_^

This is one hot fic! I want more.

Wow, that was very well written and a very enjoyable read.
And, yes, it was hot, very hot.
Also one of my favourite pairings ^^;;