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| dana1313 2005-02-13 ch 2, anon. | abusei like it. please, please please update! |
| Rina Cat 2005-01-09 ch 1, | abuseShort but deep. I felt so sorry for the lady but yeah, you mentioned about real world so true... |
| blackness 2004-10-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like it but think it needs another chapter as it is imcomplete and i for one do not like being left like that however i love the way the story is going. |
| gothicbutterflyraven1290 2004-09-06 ch 1, | abusethat was good though!u should have more confidence!ooh!ur story just gave me a good idea...:D |
| Exiled-Knight 2004-09-06 ch 1, | abuseOh wow, that was amazing. I absolutely love it. Wish I could say more but I'm pretty speechless right now. Incredible job on this. Keep Writing |
| Red X Girl 2004-09-05 ch 1, | abuseI like it! It's not bad! It has a deep, mature meaning to it that I like. Good job ^^ |
| Fairyhome2000 2004-09-05 ch 1, | abuseIt's a little rough around the edges, but it has a nice theme to it. I found myself wondering about the woman more, though--why was she having such bad luck? And why was Robin thrown into the middle of the story? Put it away for a couple of days and then look at it again. Maybe you'll improve on it, maybe it's good the way it is. |
| Rugsrat 2004-09-05 ch 1, | abuseWell, i liked this chapter very much. I hope that you did not mean for it to be a one shot, since i would definately read a second chapter (or more if you write them). good spelling, the same woman being mugged twice is kinda too easy, but oh well. All in all, a good start. keep at it. |
| JadeHawk 2004-09-05 ch 1, | abuseooh I like it!! Yay! |
| Samurai Baker X 2004-09-05 ch 1, | abuseThat was nice. Sad and kind of depressing, but thought provoking and sombre. Good job. |
| SilenceAbound 2004-09-05 ch 1, | abusedon't beat yourself up, it's good. At least I liked it. keep up the good work. :) |