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dana1313
2005-02-13
ch 2, anon.
abusei like it. please, please please update!
Rina Cat
2005-01-09
ch 1,
abuseShort but deep. I felt so sorry for the lady but yeah, you mentioned about real world so true...
blackness
2004-10-23
ch 1, anon.
abuseI like it but think it needs another chapter as it is imcomplete and i for one do not like being left like that however i love the way the story is going.
gothicbutterflyraven1290
2004-09-06
ch 1,
abusethat was good though!u should have more confidence!ooh!ur story just gave me a good idea...:D
Exiled-Knight
2004-09-06
ch 1,
abuseOh wow, that was amazing. I absolutely love it. Wish I could say more but I'm pretty speechless right now. Incredible job on this. Keep Writing
Red X Girl
2004-09-05
ch 1,
abuseI like it! It's not bad! It has a deep, mature meaning to it that I like. Good job ^^
Fairyhome2000
2004-09-05
ch 1,
abuseIt's a little rough around the edges, but it has a nice theme to it. I found myself wondering about the woman more, though--why was she having such bad luck? And why was Robin thrown into the middle of the story?
Put it away for a couple of days and then look at it again. Maybe you'll improve on it, maybe it's good the way it is.
Rugsrat
2004-09-05
ch 1,
abuseWell, i liked this chapter very much. I hope that you did not mean for it to be a one shot, since i would definately read a second chapter (or more if you write them). good spelling, the same woman being mugged twice is kinda too easy, but oh well. All in all, a good start. keep at it.
JadeHawk
2004-09-05
ch 1,
abuseooh I like it!! Yay!
Samurai Baker X
2004-09-05
ch 1,
abuseThat was nice. Sad and kind of depressing, but thought provoking and sombre. Good job.
SilenceAbound
2004-09-05
ch 1,
abusedon't beat yourself up, it's good. At least I liked it. keep up the good work. :)
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