i have to know what happens so please update. you have a great story one of the most interesting.

how long will it take you to update this?

Miako6

I know its been years but i still wish you'd update.

i dont know if you've discontinued this fic or anything - but i hope you haven't because it's really good! I love how you've played it out so far.

Please have a new chapter up soon?

hey please write more i need to know what happens. it killing me. please write more. please and thank you

your favorite chapter? THEN WHY WONT YOU COMPLETE IT?
i am waiting for the next one.

o please update soon ^^
c'ya

Heh, I liked this chapter too, though something did feel a bit off with it...I'm not sure what it is exactly, but meh...*glomps* I know I'm reviewing a bit on the late side, I had a large pile of fics to shuffle through and review, so I'm glad that I finally got to this one! Saving the best for last ne? *glomps again* I think it's Kai's personality that kind of threw me off for a bit-even Kenny's just a tad...but you had Boris and esp Tala nailed down to a T, I think that I've just got to get used to the fact that since Kai's 'little' (hehe, I'm loving that fact too) he's probably going to act differently. Poor Chief in almost loosing it earlier in the chapter-now that WAS him, and really priceless, I could totally picture him doing that! LOL...keep up the awesome work, I'm glad that you updated this again and I'm now heading off to go and read some of your other updates...^-~V

WOW
this is really good. hope you can update soon

I LOVE your story! Please update soon!

Your stories amaze me! You have a real talent for this! I am noramally a picky and critical reader, but as for your stroy, I have nothing to point out. Can't wait for the next chapter!

thats a really cool story, pla update soon!

This is a great story! I love the plot. There just aren't enough fics about Kai turning into a chibi, so naturally yours made me very happy ^_^ Keep up the great work and update soon!

i dont really have and constructive critisizam (sorry for my crappy spelling) i really like it and believe the charaters are very close to the way they act in the show :D update soon

Please update soon. It's too good to stop here.
I hope Tala isn't a bad guy in this fic, make him and Kai be friends again ^_^.