that was really good. Who sings that song? I liked it. please write more!

hmm... shows how two stubborn people deal with love. bravo. *claps*

HEy!
i like this story!
u should continuce lol
lol

Neat-o! I liked it...very sweet yet very sad. You should write a whole story behind it or something. That'd be really cool. Anyway, great job and keep up the good work! ~XoxYellowCardxoX *aka Polepeeps25*

Aw that was bittersweet, and I totally loved it. That was so sweet, and I just love the banterings between the two. Ah what love does to ya. Anyway keep up the amazing work. This is too cute. Great job. Update soon. Laters. ;)

That was really cute, I liked it alot. keep up the good work.

This was great! The song was used really well, and really captured the mood of the piece. I loved the use of the storm too. kinda gave it a dramatic effect, and really symbolised the chaotic emotions of both Trunks and Pan. Excellent job!