what?thats it?why havent u finished this story?its really good!

ahh. update soon. nice start. :)

I like the gist of the story, but your spelling and grammar could improve. Some more description would be nice as well.

The story is good! It made it to my faveorite list.

How many chapters are you making it?

Make sure there is more Fanta and Ryang!

any chance of you finishing? it's really good...

wow that was awesome cough i HATE jack cough it should be a Fanta x Ryang story!Fanta x Ryang Fanta x Ryang Fanta x Ryang Fanta x Ryang Fanta x Ryang Fanta x Ryang Fanta x Ryang! yay,Fanta x Ryang! .*

wow...that was...so stimulating. golly, i have to read it again...

Let me know when you write the next chapter. This is really good!

Funny! And so Faerie's Landingish.

PLZ PLZ PLZ WRIGHT MORE! I LOVE THIS STORY ITS REALLY GREAT SO FAR! PLZ KEEP WRIGHTING! (pouting)

Very good job! I think the only improvement you need to make is to slow things down a bit, and maybe add more description. Sometimes it was a little confusing to figure out where they were. Other than that, it was great! Keep up the good work. _ Midori

kawaii!update

So there is going to be more right? its a great story I'd hate for you to leave it there.

i really like it!

please update!

it was long, but i just had to read it all. i want to know what happens next!