|Reviews for Last One|
| vampirebeast01 5/16/10 . chapter 1
what?thats it?why havent u finished this story?its really good!
| Akahime88 6/16/07 . chapter 1
ahh. update soon. nice start. :)
| Helper 12/3/06 . chapter 1
I like the gist of the story, but your spelling and grammar could improve. Some more description would be nice as well.
| CelticDragonQueens 11/8/06 . chapter 1
The story is good! It made it to my faveorite list.
How many chapters are you making it?
Make sure there is more Fanta and Ryang!
| fanta-faerie 8/10/06 . chapter 1
any chance of you finishing? it's really good...
| inu-shinai-kirara 7/11/06 . chapter 1
wow that was awesome cough i HATE jack cough it should be a Fanta x Ryang story!Fanta x Ryang Fanta x Ryang Fanta x Ryang Fanta x Ryang Fanta x Ryang Fanta x Ryang Fanta x Ryang! yay,Fanta x Ryang! .*
| wowie 3/26/06 . chapter 1
wow...that was...so stimulating. golly, i have to read it again...
| Only the Ring Finger Knows 2/26/06 . chapter 1
Let me know when you write the next chapter. This is really good!
| ZoraAngel 12/22/05 . chapter 1
Funny! And so Faerie's Landingish.
| Shessy Girl 11/19/05 . chapter 1
PLZ PLZ PLZ WRIGHT MORE! I LOVE THIS STORY ITS REALLY GREAT SO FAR! PLZ KEEP WRIGHTING! (pouting)
| Midori Hayashi 10/20/05 . chapter 1
Very good job! I think the only improvement you need to make is to slow things down a bit, and maybe add more description. Sometimes it was a little confusing to figure out where they were. Other than that, it was great! Keep up the good work. _ Midori
| aNGieVaNGo9 7/31/05 . chapter 1
| She-Wolfay 2/1/05 . chapter 1
So there is going to be more right? its a great story I'd hate for you to leave it there.
| horsegal628 1/3/05 . chapter 1
i really like it!
| kat 12/18/04 . chapter 1
it was long, but i just had to read it all. i want to know what happens next!