OMG!?!?! I Love this story!?!?! I'm not really into the Ushio and Tora yoai of the series but I really love this story!?!? You gotta update! You've made me a Ushira Fangirl!?!?!? YEAHS!?!?

YUMMY! and THANK YOU!
Okay 2 things, you changed Karani's sex at:
Tora growled and half glared back at _him_
also it should be at,
the youth _as_ his feet
I don't think I like the idea of Ushio being as Tora feet. *wink* :-P
EXCELLENT story, wonderful idea!

kewl update soon

Don't rush the fiction, Just write faster, more detail in the scene where Tora opens the door to find Ushio. Is he laying down standing up sitting, that parts kind of confusing

Hello. Just ran across this and have to tell you that I love it! It is just what we need, more Ushio and Tora fics. I have read other stories that you have written and loved them all. I hope that you will write more soon. Thank you!

::makes drowning noises from off-stage::
_*Now*, look what you've done! The idiot's drowning in his own drool!!_
Up*blurb*date so*blurp*on!
_::in an aside:: Actually, letting him drown doesn't sound like such a bad idea... ::has to dodge a tomahawk::_
I HEA*blurb*RD THA*blurb*T!