Hurray!
Nice Ending!

thats really really awsome. Too bad you want to be an engineer. I think this is my favorit so far. Kinda a weird mix of dispear and hope tied in with a hint of confusion. Kinda like the mix, works ya know?
~Needles~

omg. thats all i can think of to say at the moment, just omg.
that is a really beautiful piece of writing you know? this will sound really sexist and crap so dont take it the wrong way but i didnt know that 17 year old guys could write like this. most of the stuff that i read is by girls and to find quality work by a guy is really cool. ignore me, im just being weird but dont ignore that fact that i think your work is amazing.
i know that this is shameless self-advertising, but you might like to check out some of my stuff on the site... *hopeful smile* i dunno, and you be the judge, but i think you might like some of it. go on... you know you want to :) lol
anyway again great fic and keep writing stuff like this for me to read (and review)
and one more thing, you are immediately on my favs list. i will read more of your stuff as soon as i can.

Beautiful. Very nicly done. Soo sad. She almost gave up hope. Very touching. Good work.

Wow...this was really touching.I liked the descriptions. I enjoyed reading this a lot...*gonna cry*... Keep up the great work!

I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT! This is just so good! You should be so proud that you wrote something so beautifully! I just don't know what to say becauseI love it so much!

*highly recommends*

Lub yah lotz,
Lvkishugs

Short, but really, really good. As with all the oneshots I automatically love, I read it several times over. It's hard to get into a Kairi story mood when you've just read an awesome, though dark, fanfic of Riku, but yours did. Keep it up!!