So sweet, Mina love Yaten!

haha looked into her for one second
the girls make it seem lik he was staring at her for an hour or something
this story is cute
i love the little comments of those people
wonderful~
be nice if it goes on ^^

i really love it! more please? ^_^

Very cute, not all that possible (since Minako-san is more one to just glomp, in my eyes), but still so very kawaii.

oh. my. God.
that was so freaking cute! ^^
Hey there! Just decided to return to my roots for a while. I haven't been into Sailormoon for, like, four years already and I have to say that this is one of the best I've ever read since my fangirling days.
The best quality in this is the simplicity, and next would be the fact that the characters were acting like the way they should. I really hate it when people's perceive Minako as someone totally out of it, and Yaten as someone untouchable. I hate that, because in fact, it isn't their true characters! i liked the way you presented them here... and the scene was just so believable that I have to believe it! it could happen! ^_^

Great job! ^_^

Oh Good Story please continue!

i Like your storey!pleas dont stop writing...i love yaten/Minako togeather...pleaz update

Please update this fabulous story as soon as possible! Thanks!

How cute! Nice piece of fluff fiction you have here, good job.