O.O UPDATE SOON! Er...please? :P This is such an awesome story! :D I'm really hooked and'll go mad if you don't get another chapter in! ^^ I've been completley loving the story, briliant job again, and again please update! :D

This is totally freaky crap. i love it! Can't wait to see what's next. Keep up the great work and update soon!

ps- please go check out my Andromeda fic!

short ...more would be better

great stuff though

Aw! Poor Harper!! ;_; Please, please, PLEASE update soon! I love this story, you're totally rocking with it! :D And, uh, I don't know how long I'll be able to wait for another chapter ;D *hint* *hint* *hint* *bribes with crazy glue and M&Ms*

freaking great story!! one of the best new stories i've read in a long time ...excellent work...

it's really nice to get something fresh!

keep it coming! i added you to all my favorite lists

Absolutely freaking great story! i'm so adding you to my favorites list!!

more more more soon please
i'm begging here

frell love your story...keep it coming

WOW! AWESOME STORY! Please, PLEASE update soon! I can't wait for more!! :D *bribes with jello, cheese, and chocolates* You know you want them XP

Oh man, this is SO awesome! I'm only on the first chapter and couldn't stop myself from reviewing!! You're really, really great with this!! :D

great chapter!

o very cool !! keep going!!

two small nits... Harper's is like 5'4 and
brendans older...

keeping goin i can't wait for the next bit!

Oh, bad boy Shay Harper makes for a very interesting story indeed. Please continue!

Ooh, very interesting indeed!

Ooh! I like! Bad boy mudfoot Harper is very, very cool. :D

Oh, cool story! I really like it. Shay's so... dark and mean. Me likes, me likes. I can't wait for more!