aw so sweet!

Aww

Awwe! Sad but sweet. I like the ending._. That was Arti, ne?

Okay, now I'm intrigued. Hope you'll continue this!

Whoa, unexpected...

who is that? for real who is that?

One of the few Gary fics on the 'net... You should make more!

Not bad, not bad at all. Evidence in the show could be used to blow this fic into small shreds, but that's what fanfics are all about, right?

One little error: you called him Gary about halfway through:

"She told Gary she wanted to go with him on his journey..."

Apart from that, it's PDG.

His girlfriend? Well, ummm... never knew he had a girlfriend. I knew who it was even before reading the end though! I knew it was him as soon as I read the second paragraph. But, you shouldn't have put his English name. I'm sure many people(invcluding myself) know his Japanese names, and for others, they could've just guessed. Oh, well, to late now! But great anyway!(o_o)

was that Ash? i cant remember the japanise names, that belonged in romance!

Ohh...How nice...Poor Shigeru...*_* I know his English name, but you used his Japanese one, so...I think that was very nice. I liked the way you showed that he used to be really good friends with...uh...Satoshi. (See? I'm way too much of a Pokémaniac.) Maybe you did exaggerate a little, but I still liked it. *_* Just one question...Who on earth is his girlfriend? Definitely something that's not in the game, eh? Well, your story may have been short, but this review is long. I'll stop now. *_*

Now, if only he and Satoshi could work things out...(no yaoi, please.)