THAT WAS AMAZING!

THAT WAS AMAZING!

please contiune this- it's really good! don't you dare end it there! I hunt you down... with a towel. :)

I've been working my way through your stuff, and I must say that you have a great style of writing. It's got the same tone as the show, with that undercurrent of tension. Tighten up a bit on grammar and punctuation, and your writing will really shine.

What a great story. I love your style and you're so good with characterization. It's such fun (even that it's so depressive) to read a story that flows so well. That scene at the pool? So haunting. Thanks so much for writing this. :)

Hey..what a surprise to find this fic here! :)
This is a SUPERB story, so touching and so involving (and also hot) ;) lol

Please, keep writing.
You are doing an excellent work! :)

hi dude, twooddsocks here!
Just thought Id drpo in and say hi, and of course, that I love this fic!! Which you already know, or at least I hope you do!! Im also going to use this review as a opportunity to nag you to update! he he... so keep going, its great stuff!!

I was trying to reveiw Ch7 but I couldn't! It's a great story - but I loved Ch 7 - wow - the sexual tension

I am loving this story. You write Jack so well and everyone is in character. I loved this Nina chapter too - not at all boring, don't worry.

I have to admit that I especially enjoyed chapter 3 and the Teri and Jack interaction, along with the Kim and her friends part. You're doing a great job of showing his conflicting feelings.

Nina's thoughts about him in chapter 4 are perfectly in character too. She's very controlled. I also really enjoyed the first story and hope to see chapter five soon.

I'm enjoying this one - please keep writing!